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You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: •Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner•Explain why you have been so busy•Arran v.2

You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: •Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner•Explain why you have been so busy•Arran v. 2
Dear Grandmother, I hope you are doing well. I am really sorry to let you know that I couldn' t come to see you. My university classes has recently been started and I' m going very much busy with my studies as one of my teacher have assigned me a social project to distribute 100 blankets to poor people around the city as the weather is getting freeze. For this purpose my instructor has told me that I' ll get good grades if I' ll complete this before the next week. So that' s why I' m occupied in this task along with my class mates. However, the good news is that I' ll be getting off from my university by next month and I' ve planned that this time I' d spent 1 full month in our town and I am hoping that mom and dad would surprise me on my birthday which is coming in mid of next month. I' ve bought a wheel chair for you since last time you told me that you want to replace you current wheel chair. So I' m desperately waiting for the next month to come and meet with you and our whole family. Keep in touch Jeetender
Dear Grandmother,

I hope you are doing well. I am
really
sorry to
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let
you know that I
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couldn&
#039; t
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come
to
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see
you.

My university classes has recently been
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started
and
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I&
#039; m going
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very
much busy with my studies as one of my teacher have assigned me a social project to distribute 100 blankets to poor
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people
around the city as the weather is getting freeze. For this purpose my instructor has
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told
me that
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I&
#039; ll
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get
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good
grades if
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I&
#039; ll complete this
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before
the
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next
week.
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So
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that&
#039; s why
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I&
#039; m occupied in this task along with my
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class
mates.

However
, the
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good
news is that
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I&
#039; ll be getting off from my university by
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next
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month
and
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I&
#039; ve planned that this time
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I&
#039; d spent 1 full
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month
in our
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town and
I am hoping that mom and dad would surprise me on my birthday which is coming in mid of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
.
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I&
#039; ve
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bought
a wheel chair for you since last time you
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told
me that you want to replace you
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current
wheel chair.

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So
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I&
#039; m
desperately
waiting for the
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next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
with you and our whole family.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Keep
in touch

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Jeetender
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS letter You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: •Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner•Explain why you have been so busy•Arran v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
206 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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