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Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration In your letter you should tell where it is how you know it why you recommend this restaurant v.2

Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration In your letter you should tell where it is how you know it why you recommend this restaurant v. 2
Dear Ana, Hope your are in radiant health and doing well in life. I has been really long time I have seen you. I have received your letter yesterday that you got promoted. I am really happy for you and congratulates you on the achievement. You have also asked about the best family restaurant as you I will be providing the est suggestion as I am working in tourist industry. In the heart of the London that is in central avenue, the famous family restaurant is located. As I am well aware you and your family member like Indian food so this Gujarati food outlet will be the best choice. It is running in the name of Jalaram foods. I have visited this place last year with my mom and we really enjoyed the food. Moreover, the surrounding is extremely clean and it' s famous for maintaining the quality. Environment is also peaceful and relaxing. They are offering the best of dishes and all the customers are satisfied. You can check the reviews online. You can easily reach the place as traffic is also less in that area. Hope you will like the place and have wonderful time with your loved ones. Yours truly, Maninder Kaur
Dear Ana,

Hope your are in radiant health and doing well in life. I
Possible agreement error -- use base form here: "have", "haven".
has
been
really
long time I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
you.

I have received your letter yesterday that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
promoted.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
really
happy for you and congratulates you on the achievement. You have
also
asked about the best family restaurant as
Consider adding a comma here.
you
I will be providing the est suggestion as I am working in tourist industry.

In the heart of the London
that is
in central avenue, the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
family restaurant
is located
. As I am well aware you and your family member like Indian food
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
this Gujarati food outlet will be the best choice. It is running in the name of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jalaram
foods.

I have visited this place last year with my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
mom and
we
really
enjoyed the food.
Moreover
, the surrounding is
The extreme adjective for clean is "spotless".
extremely clean
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
it&
#039; s
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
for maintaining the quality. Environment is
also
peaceful and relaxing.

They are offering the best of dishes and all the customers
are satisfied
. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the reviews online. You can
easily
reach the place as traffic is
also
less in that area.

Hope you will like the place and have wonderful time with your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
ones.

Yours
truly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Maninder
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Kaur
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration In your letter you should tell where it is how you know it why you recommend this restaurant v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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