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Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration In your letter you should tell where it is how you know it why you recommend this restaurant v.2

Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration In your letter you should tell where it is how you know it why you recommend this restaurant v. 2

Dear Ana, Hope your are in radiant health and doing well in life. I has been really long time I have seen you. I have received your letter yesterday that you got promoted. I am really happy for you and congratulates you on the achievement. You have also asked about the best family restaurant as you I will be providing the est suggestion as I am working in tourist industry. In the heart of the London that is in central avenue, the famous family restaurant is located. As I am well aware you and your family member like Indian food so this Gujarati food outlet will be the best choice. It is running in the name of Jalaram foods. I have visited this place last year with my mom and we really enjoyed the food. Moreover, the surrounding is extremely clean and it' s famous for maintaining the quality. Environment is also peaceful and relaxing. They are offering the best of dishes and all the customers are satisfied. You can check the reviews online. You can easily reach the place as traffic is also less in that area. Hope you will like the place and have wonderful time with your loved ones. Yours truly, Maninder Kaur

Dear Ana,

Hope your are in radiant health and doing well in life. I Possible agreement error -- use base form here: "have", "haven".havehaven
has
 been really
 long time I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 you.

I have received your letter yesterday that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 promoted. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am really
 happy for you and congratulates you on the achievement. You have also
 asked about the best family restaurant as Consider adding a comma here.you,
you
 I will be providing the est suggestion as I am working in tourist industry.

In the heart of the London that is
 in central avenue, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 family restaurant is located
. As I am well aware you and your family member like Indian food This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 this Gujarati food outlet will be the best choice. It is running in the name of Possible spelling mistake found.AlarmSalaamALARM
Jalaram
 foods.

I have visited this place last year with my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).mom, and
mom and
 we really
 enjoyed the food. Moreover
, the surrounding is The extreme adjective for clean is "spotless".spotless
extremely clean
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#039; s This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 for maintaining the quality. Environment is also
 peaceful and relaxing.

They are offering the best of dishes and all the customers are satisfied
. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the reviews online. You can easily
 reach the place as traffic is also
 less in that area.

Hope you will like the place and have wonderful time with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 ones.

Yours truly
,

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Maninder
Possible spelling mistake found.AUR
Kaur

5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS letter Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration In your letter you should tell where it is how you know it why you recommend this restaurant v. 2

Letter

American English

9 paragraphs

205 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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