Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it. Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v.3
Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it. Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 3
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a fan of your informative editorial and articles which I try to read as often as I can. I also like to share and exchange local information with my fellow residents of this town on different forums, such as your newspaper. And, as a part of this information sharing effort, I would like to talk about a restaurant, I visited recently with my family members, which I think is worth visiting.
We tried several meals at that restaurant, and I must say that they were of top quality because they all were seemed to be made with fresh ingredients. I especially liked their “mushroom fettuccine”, made with some perfectly-grinded, hot pepper flakes and evenly cut mushrooms. The French fries served there were also very delicious and chewy.
Besides, I also liked the nice sitting arrangement there in front of their spacious porch, which was nicely decorated with different kinds of flower plants. As for the customer service there, I think that the staffs at the restaurant knew perfectly well how to make their customer happy. So, based on these findings, I would certainly recommend this restaurant to anybody and hope that you would publish an article reviewing and recommending this restaurant to your readers.
Yours faithfully,
George Malone
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a fan of your informative editorial and articles which I try to read as  
often
 as I can. I  
also
 like to share and exchange local information with my fellow residents of this town on  
different
 forums, such as your newspaper. And, as a part of this information sharing effort, I would like to talk about a  
restaurant
, I visited recently with my family members, which I  
think
 is worth visiting.
We tried several meals at that  
restaurant
, and I  
must
 say that they were of top quality  
because
 they all  
were seemed
 to  
be made
 with fresh ingredients. I  
especially
 liked their “mushroom fettuccine”, made with  
some
  perfectly-grinded
, hot pepper flakes and  
evenly
  cut
 mushrooms. The French fries served there were  
also
  very
 delicious and chewy. 
Besides
, I  
also
 liked the nice sitting arrangement there in front of their spacious porch, which was  
nicely
 decorated with  
different
 kinds of flower plants. As for the customer service there, I  
think
 that the staffs at the  
restaurant
 knew  
perfectly
 well how to  
make
 their customer happy.  
So
, based on these findings, I would  
certainly
 recommend this  
restaurant
 to anybody and hope that you would publish an article reviewing and recommending this  
restaurant
 to your readers.
Yours  
faithfully
,
George Malone
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