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Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it. Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v.2

Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it. Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular reader of your daily newspaper “Times of India. ” I am writing this letter to inform you about an authentic restaurant called “Step and Eat” which I have visited recently with my family. I reckon this is a worth visiting place for others and hoping that you would write a review on this eatery to let others know about this fabulous place. Located on Smith Street near the National Park, it is a multi-cuisine restaurant. I went there with my family last Sunday. As we are fond of Italian food, my husband ordered an Italian meal. The meal comprised of a delicious soup, a signature dish of the hotel known as mixed vegetable spaghetti and at the end we had a mouth savouring dessert called Green Marshmallows which had a perfect creamy texture. It was one of the memorable dinners I have ever had with my family. The restaurant is worth visiting for everyone in the town because it offers a wide range of varieties in food to satisfy the human palate. Moreover, it maintains proper cleanliness and hygiene. The staff members are so polite, co-operative and professional - which gives a diligent feeling to the customers. Hence, I request you to write an article or review on this restaurant so that more people could come to know and visit it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Vishwa Vinutna
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a regular reader of your daily newspaper “Times of India. ” I am writing this letter to inform you about an authentic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
called “Step and Eat” which I have visited recently with my family. I reckon this is a worth visiting place for others and hoping that you would write a review on this eatery to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
others know about this fabulous place.

Located on Smith Street near the National Park, it is a multi-cuisine
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. I went there with my family last Sunday. As we are fond of Italian food, my husband ordered an Italian meal. The meal comprised of a delicious soup, a signature dish of the hotel known as mixed vegetable spaghetti and at the
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end
we had a mouth
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savouring
dessert called Green Marshmallows which had a perfect creamy texture. It was one of the memorable dinners I have ever had with my family.

The
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restaurant
is worth visiting for everyone in the town
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because
it offers a wide range of
The usual preposition for "varieties" is "of" not "in." Revise: "varieties of".
varieties in
food to satisfy the human palate.
Moreover
, it maintains proper cleanliness and hygiene. The staff members are
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so
polite, co-operative and professional
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-
which gives a diligent feeling to the customers.

Hence
, I request you to write an article or review on this
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restaurant
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so
that more
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people
could
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come
to know and visit it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Vishwa
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IELTS letter Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it. Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
239 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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