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Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it. Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v.1

Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it. Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a fan of your informative editorial and articles which I try to read as often as I can. I also like to share and exchange local information with my fellow residents of this town on different forums, such as your newspaper. And, as a part of this information sharing effort, I would like to talk about a restaurant, I visited recently with my family members, which I think is worth visiting. We tried several meals at that restaurant, and I must say that they were of top quality because they all were seemed to be made with fresh ingredients. I especially liked their “mushroom fettuccine”, made with some perfectly-grinded, hot pepper flakes and evenly cut mushrooms. The French fries served there were also very delicious and chewy. Besides, I also liked the nice sitting arrangement there in front of their spacious porch, which was nicely decorated with different kinds of flower plants. As for the customer service there, I think that the staffs at the restaurant knew perfectly well how to make their customer happy. So, based on these findings, I would certainly recommend this restaurant to anybody and hope that you would publish an article reviewing and recommending this restaurant to your readers. Yours faithfully, George Malone
Dear Sir or Madam,

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often
as I can. I
also
like to share and exchange local information with my fellow residents of this town on
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different
forums, such as your newspaper. And, as a part of this information sharing effort, I would like to talk about a
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restaurant
, I visited recently with my family members, which I
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think
is worth visiting.

We tried several meals at that
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restaurant
, and I
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must
say that they were of top quality
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because
they all
were seemed
to
be made
with fresh ingredients. I
especially
liked their “mushroom fettuccine”, made with
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some
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perfectly-grinded
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cut
mushrooms. The French fries served there were
also
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very
delicious and chewy.

Besides
, I
also
liked the nice sitting arrangement there in front of their spacious porch, which was
nicely
decorated with
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different
kinds of flower plants. As for the customer service there, I
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think
that the staffs at the
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restaurant
knew
perfectly
well how to
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make
their customer happy.
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So
, based on these findings, I would
certainly
recommend this
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restaurant
to anybody and hope that you would publish an article reviewing and recommending this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
to your readers.

Yours
faithfully
,

George Malone
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it. Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 1

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
213 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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