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Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. In your letter explain: – what you have learned while working for the company– whether you have enjoyed working for the company– what are your reasons for leaving the c v.2

Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. In your letter explain: – what you have learned while working for the company– whether you have enjoyed working for the company– what are your reasons for leaving the c v. 2
Dear Sir, I would like to bring to your notice that changing room of " Kolkata Sport Complex" has several several issues, which I noticed in my last match with Delhi. Firstly, air conditioning is not working at all working, and it is quite unpleasant in hot and humid weather. In addition, mirrors fitted on the wall are very old, and refection of images are not proper. After playing a match in such tough environment, players wants a relaxation time in changing room to plan their match. A faulty air conditioning room makes the situation unpleasant. On the top of that, old mirror make the thing worst, as player need to check their attire properly, especially body-guards that to be worn at the back. Air conditioning issue is very easy to resolve, as only ON-OFF button is faulty, whereas all mirrors need to be replaced as soon as possible. I hope all my concerns will be well taken care and will be resolved soon. Thanks in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Bibhu Kalita
Dear Sir,

I would like to bring to your notice that changing room of
&quot
; Kolkata Sport
Complex&quot
; has
several several
issues, which I noticed in my last match with Delhi.
Firstly
, air conditioning is not working at all working, and it is quite unpleasant in hot and humid weather.
In addition
, mirrors fitted on the wall are
very
old
, and refection of images are not proper.

After playing a match in such tough environment, players wants a relaxation time in changing room to plan their match. A faulty air conditioning room
makes
the situation unpleasant. On the top of that,
old
mirror
make
the thing worst, as player need to
check
their attire
properly
,
especially
body-guards that to
be worn
at the back.

Air conditioning issue is
very
easy to resolve, as
only
ON-OFF button is faulty, whereas all mirrors need to
be replaced
as
soon
as possible.

I hope all my concerns will be well taken care and will
be resolved
soon
. Thanks in anticipation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Bibhu
Kalita
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. In your letter explain: – what you have learned while working for the company– whether you have enjoyed working for the company– what are your reasons for leaving the c v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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