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Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world. What are the advantage and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking t v.2

Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world. What are the advantage and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking t v. 2
In this precious world, languages are playing the major role to transfer one’s feelings or sad to others. Although, there are different sort of languages spoken by the people who are living around the world. If it comes to under one language, there are certain pros and cons should consider which are summarized below. On the one hand, when consider about the merits of under become one language, it is bestow enormous benefits to masses. Firstly, it will really helpful to job seekers who are seeking to find the job in alien countries will get their desired work without the requirement of language grades. Secondly, the people who are willing to travel around the world, they can arrange the international tours without the need of interpretor or guide. Thirdly, it will lead to unity between nations, for example certain Asian countries, who are separated in terms of language, may join together for originating the strongest continents in this world. On the other hand, to think about the demerits of this, with out perishing existing language it is impossible. Firs of all, the existed languages are originated by their perspective ancestors for different reasons, it is mingled with people tradition and habits, future generation will forget everything about the peerless stories of ancestors life style, and also people should adopt the new language, must be difficult to who are loving their native language. Furthermore, it will pave the way to protest against this scheme. Above all, people will forget to taste the adventure of learning new things, and will make them to live a normal routine life. To sup up this, it seems to me that there are equal points to both advantages and dis advantages of to becoming beneath one language, but in reality it would be difficult to live under one language after destroyed more than million languages.
In this precious world,
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languages
are playing the major role to transfer one’s feelings or sad to others.
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Although
, there are
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different
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sort
of
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languages
spoken by the
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people
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who
are living around the world. If it
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comes
to under one
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language
, there are certain pros and cons should consider which
are summarized
below.

On the one hand, when
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consider about the
merits of under become one
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language
, it is
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bestow
enormous benefits to masses.
Firstly
, it will
really
helpful to job seekers
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who
are seeking to find the job in alien countries will
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get
their desired work without the requirement of
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language
grades.
Secondly
, the
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people
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who
are willing to travel around the world, they can arrange the international tours without the need of
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interpretor
or guide.
Thirdly
, it will lead to unity between nations,
for example
certain Asian countries,
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who
are separated
in terms of
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language
, may
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join
together for originating the strongest continents in this world.

On the other hand
, to
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think
about the demerits of this,
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with out
perishing existing
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language
it is impossible. Firs of all, the existed
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languages
are originated
by their perspective ancestors for
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different
reasons, it
is mingled
with
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people
tradition and habits, future generation will forget everything about the peerless stories of ancestors life style, and
also
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people
should adopt the new
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language
,
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must
be difficult to
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who
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are loving
their native
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language
.
Furthermore
, it will pave the way to protest against this scheme.
Above all
,
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people
will forget to taste the adventure of learning new things, and will
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make
them to
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live
a normal routine life.

To sup up this, it seems to me that there are equal points to both advantages and
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dis
advantages of to becoming beneath one
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language
,
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but
in reality it would be difficult to
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live
under one
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language
after
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destroyed
more than
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million
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languages
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS letter Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world. What are the advantage and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking t v. 2

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  American English
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5.5
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