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Essay topics: A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say. - Describe the work you wanted him to do. - What is your complaint about his job? - What do you expect him to do about it? v.2

Essay topics: A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say. - Describe the work you wanted him to do. - What is your complaint about his job? - What do you expect him to do about it? v. 2

Dear Mr. Obama, I am writing to inform you that I am not contented with the result of the work you did in my cottage. I contacted you two weeks ago in order to repair a leaked roof in my home. We agreed that you do the job within three days for five hundred dollars. You signed the contract and took the money. The problem is that the roof began to leak again. The water started to drop from the ceiling in the main room after the storm hit the town a day ago. I would like to underscore that in the signed agreement, you guarantee the quality of your work. In other words, my dripping roof is now your problem. I expect that you will address the issue within a couple of days after you receive this e-mail. Needless to say that additional money will not be paid for the job or the materials. Moreover, the traces of the rain water on the ceiling and walls in the main room should be erased completely as well. It would be appropriately that you contacted me be phone as soon as possible to negotiate all details. Your client, Mr Dubinchuk

Dear Mr. Obama,

I am writing to inform you that I am not contented with the result of the work you did in my cottage.

I contacted you two weeks ago in order to repair a leaked roof in my home. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 that you do the job within three days for five hundred dollars. You signed the contract and took the money.

The problem is that the roof began to leak again. The water This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to drop from the ceiling in the main room after the storm hit the town a day ago. I would like to underscore that in the signed agreement, you guarantee the quality of your work. In other words
, my dripping roof is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 your problem.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 that you will address the issue within a couple of days after you receive this e-mail. Needless to say that additional money will not be paid
 for the job or the materials. Moreover
, the traces of the rain water on the ceiling and walls in the

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMain
main
 room should be erased
 completely as well
. It would be appropriately
 that you contacted me be Consider using a past participle here: "phoned".phoned
phone
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible to negotiate all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
.

Your client,

Mr Possible spelling mistake found.
Dubinchuk

5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter Essay topics: A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say. - Describe the work you wanted him to do. - What is your complaint about his job? - What do you expect him to do about it? v. 2

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

198 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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