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Essay topics: A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say. - Describe the work you wanted him to do. - What is your complaint about his job? - What do you expect him to do about it? v.2

Essay topics: A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say. - Describe the work you wanted him to do. - What is your complaint about his job? - What do you expect him to do about it? v. 2
Dear Mr. Obama, I am writing to inform you that I am not contented with the result of the work you did in my cottage. I contacted you two weeks ago in order to repair a leaked roof in my home. We agreed that you do the job within three days for five hundred dollars. You signed the contract and took the money. The problem is that the roof began to leak again. The water started to drop from the ceiling in the main room after the storm hit the town a day ago. I would like to underscore that in the signed agreement, you guarantee the quality of your work. In other words, my dripping roof is now your problem. I expect that you will address the issue within a couple of days after you receive this e-mail. Needless to say that additional money will not be paid for the job or the materials. Moreover, the traces of the rain water on the ceiling and walls in the main room should be erased completely as well. It would be appropriately that you contacted me be phone as soon as possible to negotiate all details. Your client, Mr Dubinchuk
Dear Mr. Obama,

I am writing to inform you that I am not contented with the result of the work you did in my cottage.

I contacted you two weeks ago in order to repair a leaked roof in my home. We
agreed
that you do the job within three days for five hundred dollars. You signed the contract and took the money.

The problem is that the roof began to leak again. The water
started
to drop from the ceiling in the main room after the storm hit the town a day ago. I would like to underscore that in the signed agreement, you guarantee the quality of your work.
In other words
, my dripping roof is
now
your problem.

I
expect
that you will address the issue within a couple of days after you receive this e-mail. Needless to say that additional money will not
be paid
for the job or the materials.
Moreover
, the traces of the rain water on the ceiling and walls in the

main
room should
be erased
completely
as well
. It would be
appropriately
that you contacted me be
phone
as
soon
as possible to negotiate all
details
.

Your client,

Mr
Dubinchuk
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter Essay topics: A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say. - Describe the work you wanted him to do. - What is your complaint about his job? - What do you expect him to do about it? v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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