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A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: – Recommend that your friend not go ahead with th v.1

A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: – Recommend that your friend not go ahead with th v. 1
Dear Marry, hope you are doing great. It' s been a long time that I wanted to write you a letter, however, I was excessively busy. Harry was telling me, that you are buying a house nearby us. however, I would like you to reconsider the decision. Recently, I get to know that, that you have put in an offer on a house in the village of cheddar, south-west England. But I would suggest you to cancel this deal with the property dealer. this area is associated with a high rise in crimes and hence is not secure anymore. Besides, I and my family are also planning of leaving this area because of an incident that we have faced, a week ago. Two men, with covered face and a gun, just entered our house and tried to harras us. Moreover, they snatched the car key and a wallet from my hand and just ran away. For this reason, we are planning to choose a rent house in the downtown area of Qouram shatti. I have visited this area, the society is well secured and the place is economical as well. So, I recommend this to you as well. hope, to listen from you soon. Best wishes,
Dear Marry,

hope you are doing great.
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#039; s been a long time that I wanted to write you a letter,
however
, I was
excessively
busy. Harry was telling me, that you are buying a
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house
nearby us.
however
, I would like you to reconsider the decision.

Recently, I
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get
to know that, that you have put in an offer on a
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house
in the village of cheddar, south-west England.
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But
I would suggest you to cancel this deal with the property dealer.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
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area
is associated
with a high rise in crimes and
hence
is not secure anymore.

Besides
, I and my family are
also
planning of leaving this
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area
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because
of an incident that we have faced, a week ago. Two
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men
, with covered face and a gun,
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just
entered our
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house
and tried to
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harras
us.
Moreover
, they snatched the car key and a wallet from my hand and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
ran away.

For this reason
, we are planning to choose a rent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
in the downtown
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area
of
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Qouram
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shatti
. I have visited this
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area
, the society is well secured and the place is economical
as well
.
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So
, I recommend this to you
as well
.

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hope
, to listen from you
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soon
.

Best wishes,
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: – Recommend that your friend not go ahead with th v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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