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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.3

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008
The bar graphs illustrate the activity of the students of UK after graduation and post-graduation who did not opt full-time work after completing their education in 2008. Overall, students opting for higher studies is maximum for graduates and post-graduates while students doing voluntary work is minimum for both categories. For graduates, the number of students opting further studies is maximum, exactly 29, 665. The student selecting higher studies is almost double of the students opting for part-time work and who is confronted by unemployment. The number of students doing part-time work and unemployed is approximately similar, which is 17, 735 and 16, 235 respectively. The students opted for voluntary work is minimum, which is 3500. For postgraduates, the number of students doing the further study is 2, 725 which is somewhat double of the number of unemployed students (1, 625). The number of students doing part-time work is 2, 535, which is second highest and students doing voluntary work is lowest i. e. 345.
The bar graphs illustrate the activity of the
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of UK after graduation and post-graduation who did not opt full-time
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after completing their education in 2008.

Overall
,
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opting for higher
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is maximum for graduates and post-graduates while
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doing
voluntary
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work
is minimum for both categories.

For graduates, the
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number
of
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opting
further
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is maximum, exactly 29, 665. The
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selecting higher
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studies
is almost double of the
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opting for part-time
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and who
is confronted
by unemployment. The
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number
of
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part-time
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and unemployed is approximately similar, which is 17, 735 and 16, 235
respectively
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The
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opted for voluntary
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is minimum, which is 3500. For postgraduates, the
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of
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the
further
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is 2, 725 which is somewhat double of the
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of unemployed
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students
(1, 625). The
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of
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students
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part-time
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is 2, 535, which is second highest and
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voluntary
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is lowest
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345.
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