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An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at theairport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend. In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alte v.2

An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at theairport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend. In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alte v. 2
Dear John, I hope you are well and I' m eagerly interested in visiting you after so many years. Unfortunately, on 27th of June, exactly at your arrival date and time, I have to attend a meeting at the office. My company is going to sign a contract with a British partner in London and I was part of the team who negotiate terms and conditions in the past, consequently I have to take part in the meeting and I cannot miss it. I suggest you taking a taxi and go straight to my apartment. I will get the keys to my neighbor, just turn to number 10 and ask for Suzanne, she knows you and will give you the keys. I will see you in the evening around 10, until then you can take a hot shower and take a nap. I hope you have a nice journey and waiting to see you. Best wishes, Rahi
Dear John,

I hope you are well and
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eagerly
interested in visiting you after
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many
years.

Unfortunately, on 27th of June, exactly at your arrival date and time, I
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have to
attend a meeting at the office. My
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company
is going to
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sign
a contract with a British partner in
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
London and
I was part of the team who negotiate terms and conditions in the past,
consequently
I
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have to
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take part
in the meeting and I cannot miss it.

I suggest you taking a taxi and go straight to my apartment. I will
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get
the keys to my neighbor,
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just
turn to number 10 and
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ask for
Suzanne, she knows you and will give you the keys.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
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see
you in the evening around 10, until then you can take a hot shower and take a nap.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you have a nice journey and waiting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.

Best wishes,

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Rahi
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at theairport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend. In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alte v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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