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A close friend is coming to visit you. S/he has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * Ask for more details about your friend's plans* Suggest some places to vis v.2

A close friend is coming to visit you. S/he has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * Ask for more details about your friend's plans* Suggest some places to vis v. 2
Dear Andrew, Great to hear that you' re coming for a visit! I' m looking forward to showing you around. How long are you planning to stay? also, is there anything in particular you want to do while you' re here? By the way, if you haven' t booked a place to stay yet, you' re welcome to crash on my sofa. You should definitely se aside some time to explore the city centre. Of course, you can visit the main sights like the Acropolis, the original Olympic Stadium and so on, but it' s also fun to wander around the little streets and alleys and just explore. There are find lots of interesting shops and cafes dotted around. Have you tried Greek food before? if not, you' re really in for a treat. The seafood is amazing, but it' s also worth trying the classic dishes like moussaka or youvetsi-a kind of beef stew with pasta. You can get some tasty wines here, too, and they' re generally pretty affordable. Let me know your itinerary and I' ll see you soon! MJ
Dear Andrew,

Great to hear that
you&
#039; re coming for a visit!
I&
#039; m looking forward to showing you around.

How long are you planning to stay?
also
, is there anything
in particular
you want to do while
you&
#039; re here? By the way, if you
haven&
#039; t booked a place to stay
yet
,
you&
#039; re welcome to crash on my sofa.

You should definitely
se aside
some
time to explore the city
centre
.
Of course
, you can visit the main sights like the Acropolis, the original Olympic Stadium and
so
on,
but
it&
#039; s
also
fun to wander around the
little
streets and alleys and
just
explore. There are find lots of interesting shops and
cafes
dotted around.

Have you tried Greek food
before
?
if
not,
you&
#039; re
really
in for a treat. The seafood is amazing,
but
it&
#039; s
also
worth trying the classic dishes like moussaka or
youvetsi-a
kind of beef stew with pasta. You can
get
some
tasty wines here, too, and
they&
#039; re
generally
pretty affordable.

Let
me know your itinerary and
I&
#039; ll
see
you
soon
!

MJ
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS letter A close friend is coming to visit you. S/he has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * Ask for more details about your friend's plans* Suggest some places to vis v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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