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A large company in your area has decided to spen a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local dhildren's sport team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the co v.2

A large company in your area has decided to spen a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local dhildren's sport team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the co v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, First of all, I am writing to inform you regarding which could be the best manner of money spend that the public would appreciate the most. On one hand, you give the possibility to sponsor our children' s sports team which I think this is a great idea because it would bring friends and family closer in game days. Moreover, it might take the young one to travel outside the city and make new friends. However, the open-air concert idea is promissing and could bring tourists to our town. They would pay for restaurants and hotels, so it is an excellent way of grow this town' s economy. In my opinion, you should use this money for the events in open-air because we are a small town and this could definitely put us on the map and help our business around here. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, John Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

First of all
, I am writing to inform you regarding which could be the best manner of money spend that the public would appreciate the most.

On one hand, you give the possibility to sponsor our
children&
#039; s sports team which I
think
this is a great
idea
because
it would bring friends and family closer in game days.
Moreover
, it might take the young one to travel outside the city and
make
new friends.

However
, the open-air concert
idea
is
promissing
and could bring tourists to our town. They would pay for restaurants and hotels,
so
it is an excellent way of grow this
town&
#039; s economy.

In my opinion, you should
use
this money for the
events
in open-air
because
we are a
small
town and this could definitely put us on the map and
help
our business around here.

I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Yours
faithfully
,

John Smith
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter A large company in your area has decided to spen a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local dhildren's sport team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the co v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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