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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words v.3

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
The bar chart describes the difference in gender of teachers across educational system in the UK in 2010. While the percentage of male teachers increased from the lowest educational level to the highest one, the percentage of female teachers tended to go down gradually. There were very few men who worked as teachers in Nursery schools and Primary school. In contrast, the female teachers made up a large proportion of teachers group in the two types of schools that took more than ninety percent of total of the teachers. In Secondary school, the number of male teachers rose considerably but it was still lower than the number of female ones. Male and female teachers had the same proportion in College which shared a half of total number for each. Fifty-four percent of people who taught in Private training institute was male, while forty-six percent of teachers was female. Men who taught in University had double percentage than the female teachers’ one.
The bar chart
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describes
the difference in gender of
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teachers
across educational system in the UK in 2010.

While the percentage of male
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teachers
increased from the lowest educational level to the highest one, the percentage of
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female
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teachers
tended to go down
gradually
.

There were
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very
few
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men
who worked as
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teachers
in Nursery
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schools
and Primary
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school
.
In contrast
, the
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female
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teachers
made up a large proportion of
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teachers
group in the two types of
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schools
that took more than ninety percent of total of the
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teachers
. In Secondary
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school
, the number of male
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teachers
rose
considerably
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but
it was
still
lower than the number of
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female
ones.

Male and
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female
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teachers
had the same proportion in College which shared a half of total number for each. Fifty-four percent of
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people
who taught in Private training institute was male, while forty-six percent of
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teachers
was
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female
.
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Men
who taught in University had double percentage than the
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female
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teachers’
one.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS letter The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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