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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The bar chart describes the difference in gender of teachers across educational system in the UK in 2010. While the percentage of male teachers increased from the lowest educational level to the highest one, the percentage of female teachers tended to go down gradually. There were very few men who worked as teachers in Nursery schools and Primary school. In contrast, the female teachers made up a large proportion of teachers group in the two types of schools that took more than ninety percent of total of the teachers. In Secondary school, the number of male teachers rose considerably but it was still lower than the number of female ones. Male and female teachers had the same proportion in College which shared a half of total number for each. Fifty-four percent of people who taught in Private training institute was male, while forty-six percent of teachers was female. Men who taught in University had double percentage than the female teachers’ one.

IELTS letter The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words v.3

The bar chart
describes
the difference in gender of teachers across educational system in the UK in 2010. While the percentage of male teachers increased from the lowest educational level to the highest one, the percentage of female teachers tended to go down
gradually
. There were
very
few
men
who worked as teachers in Nursery schools and Primary school.
In contrast
, the female teachers made up a large proportion of teachers group in the two types of schools that took more than ninety percent of total of the teachers. In Secondary school, the number of male teachers rose
considerably
but
it was
still
lower than the number of female ones. Male and female teachers had the same proportion in College which shared a half of total number for each. Fifty-four percent of
people
who taught in Private training institute was male, while forty-six percent of teachers was female.
Men
who taught in University had double percentage than the female teachers’ one.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≤ 6
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