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You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. v. 6

Dear John, I an writing with context to my stay at your hotel ' Lilo' last weekend. When I came back, I recalled I left my bag in the hotel room. I stayed in room number 102, 5th floor, on the 1st and 2nd of September 2018. The bag which I left is a medium-sized one, brown in color with two side pockets and a big zip on the front. It contains some items such as my family pictures, few of my accessories and most importantly my cupboard keys. I would be really obliged if you could send it to my residential address through courier. You can furnish all my details from the reception computer software as entry was done when I checked in your respective hotel. Moreover, let me know if any further information is required from my end. Looking forward to receive my bag at the earliest. Thanking you in advance. Yours faithfully, Nick

IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. v.6

Dear John,
I
an
writing with context to my stay at your hotel '
Lilo&
#039; last weekend. When I came back, I recalled I
left
my bag in the hotel room. I stayed in room number 102, 5th floor, on the 1st and 2nd of September 2018. The bag which I
left
is a medium-sized one,
brown in color
with two side pockets and a
big
zip on the front. It contains
some
items such as my family pictures, few of my accessories and most
importantly
my cupboard keys. I would be
really
obliged if you could
send
it to my residential address through courier. You can furnish all my
details
from the reception computer software as entry
was done
when I
checked
in your respective hotel.
Moreover
,
let
me know if any
further
information
is required
from my
end
. Looking forward
to receive
my bag at the earliest. Thanking you in advance. Yours
faithfully
, Nick
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
7 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resources: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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