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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. v.1

A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. v. 1
Dear Samantha, I'm so glad to receive your letter yesterday in which you stated that you are planning for a week-long trip. I've got a perfect place in my mind just for you and John. I'm sure you want to make your holiday trip memorable. I had been to Copenhagen, Denmark last summer and it was a great place to be. Copenhagen is a place I cherished so much. It has so much style and beauty, and a dose of good fresh air. I stayed at the Hotel Sanders, opposite the stage door of the Royal Danish Theatre. It had glamorous touches in an otherwise homely space. Their menu is celestial. The first place I visited was Rosenborg Castle- which is 400 years old and was built in the Renaissance style. The Town Hall is another magnificent place on Radhus Square where the zero kilometre stone is located. I absolutely loved a 3-hour sightseeing tour of Copenhagen by bus and boat. I recommend you do the same and see the Danish capital's famous attractions on a narrated coach tour. It would not cost you much but you will love the experience. Finally, I must mention the food I enjoyed there. With so many hot dog stands all over the city, it’s not hard to notice locals’ love for sausages. Not only they are super tasty but also a cheap solution to fill hunger while roaming around the city. One food you must enjoy is Falafel. I wish you a great trip. Take care and write me back when you are free. Warm wishes, Barbara
Dear Samantha,

I'm
so
glad to receive your letter yesterday in which you stated that you are planning for a week-long trip. I've
got
a perfect
place
in my mind
just
for you and John.

I
'm sure you want to
make
your holiday trip memorable.
I
had been to Copenhagen, Denmark last summer and it was a great
place
to be. Copenhagen is a
place
I cherished
so
much. It has
so
much style and beauty, and a dose of
good
fresh air.

I stayed at the Hotel Sanders, opposite the stage door of the Royal Danish
Theatre
. It had glamorous touches in an
otherwise
homely space. Their menu is celestial. The
first
place
I visited was
Rosenborg
Castle- which is 400 years
old
and
was built
in the Renaissance style. The Town Hall is another magnificent
place
on
Radhus
Square where the zero
kilometre
stone
is located
.

I
absolutely
loved
a 3-hour sightseeing tour of Copenhagen by bus and boat. I recommend you do the same and
see
the Danish capital's
famous
attractions on a narrated coach tour. It would not cost you much
but
you will
love
the experience.

Finally
, I
must
mention the food I enjoyed there. With
so
many
hot dog stands all over the city, it’s not
hard
to notice locals’
love
for sausages. Not
only
they are super tasty
but
also
a
cheap
solution to fill hunger while roaming around the city. One food you
must
enjoy is Falafel.

I wish you a great trip. Take care and write me back when you are free.

Warm wishes,

Barbara
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. v. 1

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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