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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. v. 1

Dear Samantha, I'm so glad to receive your letter yesterday in which you stated that you are planning for a week-long trip. I've got a perfect place in my mind just for you and John. I'm sure you want to make your holiday trip memorable. I had been to Copenhagen, Denmark last summer and it was a great place to be. Copenhagen is a place I cherished so much. It has so much style and beauty, and a dose of good fresh air. I stayed at the Hotel Sanders, opposite the stage door of the Royal Danish Theatre. It had glamorous touches in an otherwise homely space. Their menu is celestial. The first place I visited was Rosenborg Castle- which is 400 years old and was built in the Renaissance style. The Town Hall is another magnificent place on Radhus Square where the zero kilometre stone is located. I absolutely loved a 3-hour sightseeing tour of Copenhagen by bus and boat. I recommend you do the same and see the Danish capital's famous attractions on a narrated coach tour. It would not cost you much but you will love the experience. Finally, I must mention the food I enjoyed there. With so many hot dog stands all over the city, it’s not hard to notice locals’ love for sausages. Not only they are super tasty but also a cheap solution to fill hunger while roaming around the city. One food you must enjoy is Falafel. I wish you a great trip. Take care and write me back when you are free. Warm wishes, Barbara

IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. v.1

Dear Samantha, I'm
so
glad to receive your letter yesterday in which you stated that you are planning for a week-long
trip
. I've
got
a perfect place in my mind
just
for you and John.
I
'm sure you want to
make
your holiday
trip
memorable.
I
had been to Copenhagen, Denmark last summer and it was a great place to be. Copenhagen is a place I cherished
so
much. It has
so
much style and beauty, and a dose of
good
fresh air. I stayed at the Hotel Sanders, opposite the stage door of the Royal Danish
Theatre
. It had glamorous touches in an
otherwise
homely space. Their menu is celestial. The
first
place I visited was
Rosenborg
Castle- which is 400 years
old
and
was built
in the Renaissance style. The Town Hall is another magnificent place on
Radhus
Square where the zero
kilometre
stone
is located
. I
absolutely
loved
a 3-hour sightseeing tour of Copenhagen by bus and boat. I recommend you do the same and
see
the Danish capital's
famous
attractions on a narrated coach tour. It would not cost you much
but
you will
love
the experience.
Finally
, I
must
mention the food I enjoyed there. With
so
many
hot dog stands all over the city, it’s not
hard
to notice locals’
love
for sausages. Not
only
they are super tasty
but
also
a
cheap
solution to fill hunger while roaming around the city. One food you
must
enjoy is Falafel. I wish you a great
trip
. Take care and write me back when you are free. Warm wishes, Barbara
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
9 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resources: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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