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You have recently moved to a new flat Unfortunately you lost some money the other day and can not afford to pay next month s rent which is due Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation and that you will pay as soon as your parents send the m v.2

You have recently moved to a new flat Unfortunately you lost some money the other day and can not afford to pay next month s rent which is due Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation and that you will pay as soon as your parents send the m v. 2
Dear Mr. Smith I am your tenant and moved recently into your flat which is located in the city centre near the oxford university. I am sorry to say that I am not able to pay this month' s rent before 10th. I am writing this letter to tell you about my condition and also some issues with the apartment. Yesterday, I went to market to buy necessary items and to withdraw money from ATM to pay rent but when I returned to my room, my wallet was missing. I tried to find it but all in vain. Cash was in the purse that I lost. That is why, I am not able to make payment on time. Luckily, my debit card was not in the wallet. Now, I have asked my parents to send me some money. As soon as I received the amount, I will give you the rent. Besides that there are several issues with the room. Firstly, the tap of the bathroom is leaking. It leads to wastage of water. Secondly, wardrobe is not closing properly and its lock is broken. As I have expensive items like laptop which is not safe to place outside without locking them in cupboard. Hope that you could understand my situation, allowing me to pay house rent few days later and resolve the issues which I am facing in the apartment. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely Flora Thompson
Dear Mr. Smith

I am your tenant and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
recently into your flat which
is located
in the city
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
near the oxford university. I am sorry to say that I am not able to pay this
Possible spelling mistake found.
month&
#039; s rent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
10th.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about my condition and
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
issues with the apartment.

Yesterday, I went to market to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
necessary items and to withdraw money from ATM to pay rent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
when I returned to my room, my wallet was missing. I tried to find it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
all in vain. Cash was in the purse that I lost.
That is
why, I am not able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
payment on time. Luckily, my debit card was not in the wallet.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, I have asked my parents to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
money. As
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as I received the amount, I will give you the rent.

Besides
that there are several issues with the room.
Firstly
, the tap of the bathroom is leaking. It leads to wastage of water.
Secondly
, wardrobe is not closing
properly
and its lock
is broken
.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I have expensive items like laptop which is not safe to place outside without locking them in cupboard.

Hope that you could understand my situation, allowing me to pay
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
rent few days later and resolve the issues which I am facing in the apartment.

I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
sincerely


Flora Thompson
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
He who knows no foreign languages know nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS letter You have recently moved to a new flat Unfortunately you lost some money the other day and can not afford to pay next month s rent which is due Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation and that you will pay as soon as your parents send the m v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
242 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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