04. 10. 2017work with mistakes. Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say– Why are you moving to another v.2
04. 10. 2017work with mistakes. Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say– Why are you moving to another v. 2
Dear John,
I heard from our colleagues you are being transferred to Dallas next month and I would like to help you with accommodation.
Recently, I got married and we decided to start our marital life in a new house. We are going to take a mortgage on a newly built two-story house that is situated on the outskirts of the megalopolis in a peaceful and calm neighborhood. In fact, the credit has been approved and we are going to move in soon. So, my old apartment will be available for rent.
The flat I recommend is located in a spectacular place. There is a riverside that is well-maintain and a big beautiful park.
Moreover, there are two cinema theaters, three nice restaurants, a gym and a big department store. In other words, all needed infrastructure and services are conveniently located nearby.
Furthermore, the landlord is a decent, old woman who will not cause you any troubles and the rent is reasonable. In average, apartments in this neighborhood cost about eight hundred dollars per month but the lady charges only five hundred.
If you like my idea, I will talk to the landlord as soon as I get your consent.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene.
Dear John,
I heard from our colleagues you are
being transferred
to Dallas
next
month and I would like to
help
you with accommodation.
Recently, I
got
married and
we decided to
start
our
marital
life in a new
house
. We are going to take a mortgage on a
newly
built two-story
house
that
is situated
on the outskirts of the megalopolis in a peaceful and calm neighborhood. In fact, the credit has been
approved and
we are going to
move
in
soon
.
So
, my
old
apartment will be available for rent.
The flat I recommend
is located
in a spectacular place. There is a riverside
that is
well-maintain and a
big
beautiful
park.
Moreover
, there are two cinema theaters, three nice restaurants, a gym and a
big
department store.
In other words
, all needed infrastructure and services are
conveniently
located nearby.
Furthermore
, the landlord is a decent,
old
woman who will not cause you any troubles and the rent is reasonable. In average, apartments in this neighborhood cost about eight hundred dollars per month
but
the lady charges
only
five
hundred
.
If you like my
idea
, I will talk to the landlord as
soon
as I
get
your consent.
Sincerely
yours,
Eugene.
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0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes