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Youth drug abuse is a serious problem what are possible cause of this behavior Do you have any suggestions to control that give reason for your answer and includes any relevant ex from own knowledge v.2

Youth drug abuse is a serious problem what are possible cause of this behavior Do you have any suggestions to control that give reason for your answer and includes any relevant ex from own knowledge v. 2
Drug is a more harmful habit. Nowadays, mostly youngest addicted of drug. Their are abuse failed in future, and their life spoiled. afterthat youth drugs is created many dangerous problem s in his life I completely agree to this statement that everyone responsiblity for eradicate drugs from world. Firstly, most of youngest used different varieties of drugs. because
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Drug
is a more harmful habit. Nowadays,
mostly
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youngest
addicted of
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drug
.
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Their
are abuse failed
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in future
, and their life spoiled.
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afterthat
youth
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drugs
is created
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many
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dangerous
problem s in his life I completely
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agree
to this statement that everyone
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responsiblity
for eradicate
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drugs
from world.

Firstly
, most of
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youngest
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used
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different
varieties of
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drugs
.
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because
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5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Youth drug abuse is a serious problem what are possible cause of this behavior Do you have any suggestions to control that give reason for your answer and includes any relevant ex from own knowledge v. 2

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
57 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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