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For most people, when they get their first job they have little Idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation through out their working life If they decided to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall. v.2

For most people, when they get their first job they have little Idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation through out their working life If they decided to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall. v. 2
Hardworking is more necessary for everyone. People who stay with same organisation have the advantages of thought-out understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and employs. if they work hard, their promotion prospects are good, and there are likely to be grater job security, with the promise of a good pension. subsequently, then they got additive incentive to long term employs including bonuses, and record scheme. Firstly, one of the drawbacks of staying with same organisation, is that the person may get stuck doing the same job. However, year after year in case of of moving away from gain more skills and more organised projects. Because these type of person doing only one job as professional. As well as person are lack from additional knowledge. Basically, That everyone achieves plenty of knowledge related to any field, and site After that, they have lot of imposition, and achieve success easily in his life.
Hardworking is more necessary for everyone.
People
who stay with same
organisation
have the advantages of
thought
-out understanding how it works and
also
becoming familiar with the staff and employs.
if
they work
hard
, their promotion prospects are
good
, and there are likely to be grater job security, with the promise of a
good
pension.
subsequently
, then they
got
additive incentive to long term employs including bonuses, and record scheme.

Firstly
, one of the drawbacks of staying with same
organisation
, is that the person may
get
stuck doing the same job.
However
, year after year in case
of of
moving away from gain more
skills
and more
organised
projects.
Because
these type of person doing
only
one job as professional.
As well
as person are lack from additional knowledge.

Basically
, That everyone achieves
plenty
of knowledge related to any field, and site After that, they have
lot of
imposition, and achieve success
easily
in his life.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay For most people, when they get their first job they have little Idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation through out their working life If they decided to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall. v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
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