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Nowadays more task at home and work me being performed by robots. Why do you think happening is it a positive or negative development v.2

Nowadays more task at home and work me being performed by robots. Why do you think happening is it a positive or negative development v. 2
" The science of today is the technology of tomorrow" . with the rise in modernisation. A man has transferred his life tremondously. He has progressed from single walking a barefooted to take the first step on moon. This asserts that should the use of robots; which home, work is benefited or not? Through this essay. I shall explore from the same various aspects in the following paragraphs. To the sum, that introduction of robots is more beneficial for everyone. Because they do work without any mistake. However, proper authority as well as disciplines. To begin with, the robots are more accurate as well as efficiently because they have more energy for doing any task. However, they can use for perfessional work like industrial. On moving, they are capacity obtained product frequently into seconds. Moreover, they have great impact on everyone' s life. Nextly, robots can used on business level for development of product that not obtain by human being. Because they obtained harmful as well as more biggest product. As apart from, they have great impact on country improvements. Because through it nation automatically progressed. Furthermore, they can effect on status symbol. Moreover, through people are popular. Although, done any work according to requirement. Finally, robots have carefully about anything related to personal to professional. However, the following linkage they should for complexity necessity through computer program. That have most pressing concerns for do anything.
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first
step on moon. This asserts that should the
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use
of robots; which home,
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work
is benefited
or not?
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Through
this essay. I shall explore from the same various aspects in the following paragraphs.

To the sum, that introduction of robots is more beneficial for everyone.
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Because
they do
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work
without any mistake.
However
, proper authority
as well
as disciplines.

To
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begin
with, the robots are more accurate
as well
as
efficiently
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because
they have more energy for doing any task.
However
, they can
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use
for
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perfessional
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work
like industrial. On moving, they are capacity obtained product
frequently
into seconds.
Moreover
, they have great impact on
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everyone&
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, robots can
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used
on business level for development of product that not obtain by human being.
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they obtained harmful
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as
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more biggest
product.

As apart from, they have great impact on country improvements.
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it nation
automatically
progressed.
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, they can effect on status symbol.
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,
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through
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people
are popular.
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, done any
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work
according to requirement.
Finally
, robots have
carefully
about anything related to personal to professional.
However
, the following linkage they should for complexity necessity
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through
computer program. That have most pressing concerns for do anything.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays more task at home and work me being performed by robots. Why do you think happening is it a positive or negative development v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
236 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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