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Your school is going to give prize to the best teacher then that teacher should be evaluated by the students or should be by other teachers. Agree or disagree? v.1

Your school is going to give prize to the best teacher then that teacher should be evaluated by the students or should be by other teachers. Agree or disagree? v. 1
Best teacher means not only teaching the students but also give the knowledge of academic as well as general things. Students learn many things from the teachers and also teachers play important role behind the student’s success. Every year schools and colleges give best teacher award. But, it is not good decision that best teacher evaluated by students and other teachers for following reasons. To begin with, best teacher evaluated by other teachers is more difficult task because of teachers chose close once to maintain their friendship. Students also choose teacher who is liberal and amiable rather than strict and rigid towards them. Students and teachers favoring not by teaching style but their own purposes, consequently, award give to teacher who is not really deserve it. It is causes the negative impact on those who really teaching better and always good thinking for students. For an example, in my college, organize the award ceremony in which students choose best teacher. Most of students choose the biology teacher who is give freedom to students and not strict to on the student’s academic works, as result who teachers are best teaching and work for students were discourage by students decision and negative impact on their minds. Furthermore, best teachers evaluated by students grade and specific subject knowledge rather than evaluated by students and teachers. Best teacher whose students understand the each lecture and they easily grasp what he was teach. For an example, my maths professor was teaching style is very good and every student’s are easily understand whole concept. His strict nature and teaching style helped to students got the good grade in maths, therefore, evaluated best teacher by student’s grades rather than choose by teachers or students. In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reason, best teacher is who is motivated the students on their study, students understand what he/she teach them and students get a good grade on his subject. All these reasons, I certainly disagree with the statement that best teacher should be appraisal by students and other teachers,
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the knowledge of academic
as well
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learn
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many
things from the
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teachers
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play
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role behind the
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student’s
success. Every year schools and colleges
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give
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best
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teacher
award.
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, it is not
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good
decision that
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best
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evaluated
by
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students
and other
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teachers
for following reasons.

To
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with,
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best
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evaluated
by other
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is more difficult task
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because
of
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teachers
chose close once to maintain their friendship.
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also
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choose
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teacher
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who
is liberal and amiable
rather
than strict and rigid towards them.
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and
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favoring not by
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teaching
style
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but
their
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own
purposes,
consequently
, award
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give
to
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teacher
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who
is not
really
deserve it. It is causes the
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impact on those
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really
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teaching
better and always
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good
thinking for
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students
. For an example, in my college, organize the award ceremony in which
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students
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choose
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best
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teacher
. Most of
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students
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choose
the biology
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teacher
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who
is
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give
freedom to
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students
and not strict to on the
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student’s
academic works, as result
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who
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teachers
are
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best
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teaching
and work for
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students
were
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by
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students
decision and
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negative
impact on their minds.

Furthermore
,
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teachers
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evaluated
by
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students
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grade
and specific subject knowledge
rather
than
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by
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and
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.
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teacher
whose
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understand
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the each
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lecture and
they
easily
grasp what he was
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. For an example, my
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professor was
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teaching
style is
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very
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good
and every
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are
easily
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understand
whole concept. His strict nature and
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style
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helped
to
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students
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in
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,
therefore
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rather
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by
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teachers
or students.

In brief
, contemplating all the aforementioned reason,
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teacher
is
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who
is motivated
the
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students
on their study,
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students
understand what he/she teach them and
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students
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get
a
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on his subject. All these reasons, I
certainly
disagree with the statement that
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best
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should be appraisal by
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and other
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,
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
91Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS essay Your school is going to give prize to the best teacher then that teacher should be evaluated by the students or should be by other teachers. Agree or disagree? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
340 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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