This is a universally acknowledged fact that traffic congestion becomes the major problem throughout the world. It is believed that private cars should be banned in the city centres to sort out the aforesaid problem. However, I completely disagree with this point of view. These points of view will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, everybody has the right to drive his own car. They usually spend some amount of money to buy cars to get privacy. For instance, if government pass such law then it may decline the privacy of the individual to great extent. So, it has unavoidable consequences for people who have purchased cars. Therefore, it is apparent that government should not implement this thought besides they have to provide well-equipped public transport so people can try to use buses, trains, streetcars whenever it is possible to them. That is why some people gravitate towards this point of view.
Also, if people know that they cannot use their cars to reach their desired destination then obviously they would not spend money on buying cars. Thus, it may have an effect on the economy of the nation. In Addition, the employment rate will be boomed swiftly because of the lack of an automobile industry. what is more, individuals have to need to use their cars it case of a medical emergency to reach the hospital whether they live in the heart of a city.
After analyzing the aforesaid points, it has been proved that government should not follow this thought as it has various disadvantages. Ideally, they can encourage to individuals for public transport to sort out such major problem.
This is a
universally
acknowledged fact that traffic congestion becomes the major problem throughout the world. It
is believed
that private
cars
should
be banned
in the city
centres
to sort out the aforesaid problem.
However
, I completely disagree with this
point
of view. These
points
of view will
be discussed
in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To
begin
with, everybody has the right to drive his
own
car
. They
usually
spend
some
amount of money to
buy
cars
to
get
privacy.
For instance
, if
government
pass such law then it may decline the privacy of the individual to great extent.
So
, it has unavoidable consequences for
people
who have
purchased
cars
.
Therefore
, it is apparent that
government
should not implement this
thought
besides
they
have to
provide well-equipped public transport
so
people
can try to
use
buses, trains, streetcars whenever it is possible to them.
That is
why
some
people
gravitate towards this
point
of view.
Also
, if
people
know that they cannot
use
their
cars
to reach their desired destination then
obviously
they would not spend money on buying
cars
.
Thus
, it may have an effect on the economy of the nation.
In Addition
, the employment rate will
be boomed
swiftly
because
of the lack of an automobile industry.
what
is more, individuals
have to
need to
use
their
cars
it
case
of a medical emergency to reach the hospital whether they
live
in the heart of a city.
After analyzing the aforesaid
points
, it has
been proved
that
government
should not follow this
thought
as it has various disadvantages.
Ideally
, they can encourage to individuals for public transport to sort out such major problem.
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