In some countries, young people are motivated to join job or to travel for a year between termination of schooling and beginning tertiary education. Although, it enables these young minds to enrich themselves with the real world experiences, it poses a risk on further education of them.
On the one hand, doing work or travelling helps individuals to broaden their horizons. In academic paradigm learners are not able to see the practical implications of things and they learn in books, While doing the job or travelling to different destinations these individuals are able to come across different situations and people. This, helps them to learn and understand better about the practical aspects of the education in further life. For Example, I took a sabbatical of 1 year before my university education and worked as an intern sales representative, which later helped me in various skills.
On the other hand, many people do not resume education once they taste this independence. This is because many people assume that they just need to earn degree to get a handsomely paid job, if they are able to earn well they don't need to resume further university degree. For Instance, One of my friends who joined a job after schooling never joined the university education again and today he works at a clerical job.
In conclusion, While the trend of taking the sabbatical among the young people helps them to learn about the new perspective, it is a serious issue of the low number of people joining the university education.
In
some
countries, young
people
are motivated
to
join
job
or to travel for a year between termination of schooling and beginning tertiary
education
. Although, it enables these young minds to enrich themselves with the real world experiences, it poses a
risk
on
further
education
of them.
On the one hand, doing work or travelling
helps
individuals to broaden their horizons. In academic paradigm learners are not able to
see
the practical implications of
things and
they learn in books, While doing the
job
or travelling to
different
destinations these individuals are able to
come
across
different
situations and
people
. This,
helps
them to learn and understand better about the practical aspects of the
education
in
further
life.
For Example
, I took a sabbatical of 1 year
before
my
university
education
and worked as an intern sales representative, which later
helped
me in various
skills
.
On the other hand
,
many
people
do not resume
education
once they taste this independence. This is
because
many
people
assume that they
just
need to earn degree to
get
a
handsomely
paid
job
, if they are able to earn well they don't need to resume
further
university
degree.
For Instance
, One of my friends who
joined
a
job
after schooling never
joined
the
university
education
again and
today
he works at a clerical job.
In conclusion
, While the trend of taking the sabbatical among the young
people
helps
them to learn about the new perspective, it is a serious issue of the low number of
people
joining the
university
education
.
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