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Your neighbours have recently written to you co complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: -Explain the reasons for the noise-Apologise-Describe what action you will take v.1

Your neighbours have recently written to you co complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: -Explain the reasons for the noise-Apologise-Describe what action you will take v. 1
There was a lengthy dispute about whether people should brace a poor job or lack of money, or seek for a chance to improve the situation. I believe that we should accept the situation and try to promote it. The argument of approving that bad status are the best choices for us is that we need to know the difference between current ability and our target point. When we find a phenomenon with a negative impact on us, we ought to analyse why something bad happened. For example, if someone does not have enough money, accept and then analysing their cash flow is the best avenue to detect how money goes out. At the same time, they could prevent from money depleting too fast to stack in an embarrassing situation with the same spending pattern. On the other hand, we cannot raise ourselves with financial support from jobs. In an exactly perfect example, a job which does not meet your demand does not mean that it is not important for your material life. Admittedly, pursuing an ideal job or lifestyle is as same essential as accepting a bad situation. Firstly, followed by the example I mentioned about lack of money, analysing and saving money is a tool to constrain the output flow, while seeking for a better method to earn money is an approach to increase the input flow. If they only want to save money without earning money, their lifestyle might be harsh, struggling and unhappy. Secondly, more opportunities are likely to appear if we attempt more in it. For instance, if one does not have much interest in it, they are not prone to concentrate on full attention on their job, that is to say, they might not obtain some sense of achievement or fulfilment. In conclusion, it is indisputable that we have to accept current situations when we do not have a better choice, while, if possible, we ought to try our best to enhance our life status and situations.
There was a lengthy dispute about whether
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people
should brace a poor
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job
or lack of
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money
, or seek for a chance to
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improve
the
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situation
. I believe that we should accept the
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situation
and try to promote it.

The argument of approving that
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bad
status are the best choices for us is that we need to know the difference between
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current
ability and our target point. When we find a phenomenon with a
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negative
impact on us, we ought to
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analyse
why something
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bad
happened.
For example
, if someone
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does
not have
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enough
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money
, accept and then
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analysing
their cash flow is the best avenue to detect how
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money
goes out. At the same time, they could
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prevent
from
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money
depleting too
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fast
to stack in an embarrassing
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situation
with the same spending pattern.
On the other hand
, we cannot raise ourselves with financial support from
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jobs
. In an exactly perfect example, a
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job
which
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does
not
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meet
your demand
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does
not mean that it is not
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important
for your material life.

Admittedly
, pursuing an ideal
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job
or lifestyle is as same essential as accepting a
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bad
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situation
.
Firstly
, followed by the example I
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mentioned about lack
of
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money
,
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analysing
and saving
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money
is a tool to constrain the output flow, while seeking for a better method to earn
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money
is an approach to increase the input flow. If they
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only
want to save
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money
without earning
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money
, their lifestyle might be harsh, struggling and unhappy.
Secondly
, more opportunities are likely to appear if we attempt more in it.
For instance
, if one
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does
not have much interest in it, they are not prone to concentrate on full attention on their
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job
,
that is
to say, they might not obtain
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some
sense of achievement or
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fulfilment
.

In conclusion
, it is indisputable that we
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have to
accept
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current
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situations
when we do not have a better choice, while, if possible, we ought to try our best to enhance our life status and
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situations
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Your neighbours have recently written to you co complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: -Explain the reasons for the noise-Apologise-Describe what action you will take v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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