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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takeYou should write at least 150 words v.2

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takev. 2
Some people think that it would be beneficial for students to live by themselves while others believe that they should stay / live with their parents. I believe that / in my opinion living alone is far better than staying with parents if finances do not prevent it. Firstly, one of the many benefits of living alone is that students learn to live independently. They start to see life from an angle that they never had even thought of. Living alone develops responsibility and the ability to make life-changing decisions. Secondly, living away from parents requires students to manage their budgets. They learn to manage expenses such as paying rent, buying groceries etc. Apart from that, they develop skills that will be beneficial to them in the later stage of their life. Students might not be able to learn all these things if they are staying with their parents. Finally, students live in groups with their friends. This can help them develop leadership qualities and better teamwork skills as they live together, study together and help one another with everything. On the other hand, it might not be feasible for those who cannot afford it. Students who do not have a stable source of income will most probably have to live with their parents unless their parents are willing to finance their independent living. In conclusion, although it may not be practical for some, students should be encouraged to live on their own because it teaches them valuable life skills and enables them to manage their finances wisely.
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students
to
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live
by themselves while others believe that they should stay /
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live
with their
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parents
. I believe that / in my opinion
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living
alone is far better than staying with
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parents
if finances do not
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prevent
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Firstly
, one of the
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many
benefits of
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living
alone is that
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students
learn to
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live
independently
. They
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start
to
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see
life from an angle that they never had even
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thought
of.
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Living
alone develops responsibility and the ability to
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make
life-changing decisions.
Secondly
,
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living
away from
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parents
requires
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students
to manage their budgets. They learn to manage expenses such as paying rent, buying groceries etc.

Apart from that, they develop
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skills
that will be beneficial to them in the later stage of their life.
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Students
might not be able to learn all these things if they are staying with their
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parents
.
Finally
,
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students
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live
in groups with their friends. This can
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help
them develop leadership qualities and better teamwork
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skills
as they
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live
together, study together and
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help
one another with everything.

On the other hand
, it might not be feasible for those who cannot afford it.
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Students
who do not have a stable source of income will most
probably
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have to
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live
with their
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parents
unless their
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parents
are willing to finance their independent living.

In conclusion
, although it may not be practical for
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some
,
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students
should
be encouraged
to
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live
on their
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own
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because
it teaches them valuable life
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skills
and enables them to manage their finances
wisely
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takev. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
258 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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