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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In the letter: - Explain the reason for the noise; - Apologize; - Describe what action you will take. v.1

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In the letter: - Explain the reason for the noise; - Apologize; - Describe what action you will take. v. 1
The earth's average surface temperatures are increasing every year by the pollutions which are emitted by vehicles. However, some people believe that the rise in fuel prices is the best way to solve environmental problems. Although it is a controversial statement, I completely disagree with this statement. Firstly, it is important to solve the environmental problems due to the global warming effect on the earth's surface. Many harmful gases are released into the atmosphere by fuel vehicles, while electric vehicles can be the best way to this problem. For instance, electric vehicles do not emit any harmful gases into the atmosphere as it runs through electricity. Although it saves fuel, but it takes more time to charge. Whereas growing more trees is also a solution for that cause. In contrast, many people cannot afford those electric cars, so they use normal fuel vehicles. Raise in petrol or diesel price can affect the people in various ways. For example, when the petrol price is raised, many people usually prefer to use public transport. Excess use public transport leads to more traffic jam on roads for hours. This makes people feel uncomfortable as well as late to their works. So, it causes many disadvantages to normal middle class people who tends to use normal vehicles for their daily uses. In conclusion, by the above aforementioned points, the rise in fuel rates has various effects on normal people and it is not the best way to solve the environmental pollutions. However, the electric vehicles and growing more trees can solve the majority of the problem. The government should implement new awareness of pollution in schools can also results to decrease environmental problems
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vehicles
.
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,
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some
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people
believe that the rise in
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fuel
prices is the best way to
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solve
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environmental
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problems
. Although it is a controversial statement, I completely disagree with this statement.

Firstly
, it is
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important
to
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solve
the
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environmental
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problems
due to the global warming effect on the earth's surface.
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Many
harmful gases
are released
into the atmosphere by
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fuel
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vehicles
, while
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electric
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vehicles
can be the best way to this
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problem
.
For instance
,
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electric
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vehicles
do not emit any harmful gases into the atmosphere as it runs through electricity. Although it saves
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fuel
,
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but
it takes more time to charge. Whereas growing more trees is
also
a solution for that cause.

In contrast
,
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many
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people
cannot afford those
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electric
cars,
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so
they
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use
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normal
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fuel
vehicles.

Raise in petrol or diesel price can affect the
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people
in various ways.
For example
, when the petrol price
is raised
,
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many
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people
usually
prefer to
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use
public transport. Excess
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use
public transport leads to more traffic jam on roads for hours.
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This
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makes
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people
feel uncomfortable
as well
as late to their works.
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So
, it causes
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many
disadvantages to
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normal
middle
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class
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people
who
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tends
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use
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normal
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vehicles
for their daily
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uses
.

In conclusion
, by the above aforementioned points, the rise in
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fuel
rates has various effects on
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normal
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people
and it is not the best way to
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solve
the
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environmental
pollutions.
However
, the
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electric
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vehicles
and growing more trees can
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solve
the majority of the
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problem
. The
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government
should implement new awareness of pollution in schools can
also
results to decrease
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environmental
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problems
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In the letter: - Explain the reason for the noise; - Apologize; - Describe what action you will take. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
278 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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