From my everyday experience and observation I can stand that the best way of learning about life is through personal understanding. However, some people think that it is wiser to learn about life through listening to the advice of family and friends. It does not mean I totally disagree with this way of learning. Moreover, I think that it is wise for a person to take an intermediate position because each of these ways has its own advantages. Below I will give my reasons to support my point of view.
From the one side, learning through one's personal experience brings many benefits. First of all, scientists say that personal experience has greater impact on a person. I have to agree with this. Take for example children. They will not believe their parents that something can hurt them until they try it and make sure of it. Furthermore, most likely they will remember this observation longer. Second of all, people learn how to analyze their mistakes, make conclusions and next time try to avoid them. So, I think it is a great experience that makes people stronger, more self-confident and persistent. They gain more knowledge and experience that will be very helpful and valuable in the future.
From the other side, listening to the advice of family and friends brings many benefits too. Parents with great patience pass down their knowledge and experience to their children. They teach them all they know and they want their children do not make the same mistakes. In addition to those practical benefits, learning from someone's advice is painless. For example, parents nowadays very often talk to their children about drugs. I think it is a great example when one should not try drugs in order to gain new experience. I think it is a case when children must trust their parents.
To sum up, I think it is wise to combine both of these ways to learn and try to analyze personal mistakes as well as not personal. I think together they can greatly simplify one's life and make the way to success shorter.
From my everyday
experience
and observation I can stand that the best
way
of
learning
about life is through
personal
understanding.
However
,
some
people
think
that it is wiser to learn about life through listening to the advice of family and friends. It does not mean I
totally
disagree with this
way
of
learning
.
Moreover
, I
think
that it is wise for a person to take an intermediate position
because
each of these
ways
has its
own
advantages. Below I will give my reasons to support my point of view.
From the one side,
learning
through one's
personal
experience
brings
many
benefits.
First of all
, scientists say that
personal
experience
has greater impact on a person. I
have to
agree
with this. Take
for example
children
. They will not believe their parents that something can hurt them until they try it and
make
sure of it.
Furthermore
, most likely they will remember this observation longer. Second of all,
people
learn how to analyze their mistakes,
make
conclusions and
next
time try to avoid them.
So
, I
think
it is a great
experience
that
makes
people
stronger, more self-confident and persistent. They gain more knowledge and
experience
that will be
very
helpful and valuable in the future.
From the other side, listening to the advice of family and friends brings
many
benefits too. Parents with great patience pass down their knowledge and
experience
to their
children
. They teach them all they
know and
they want their
children
do not
make
the same mistakes.
In addition
to those practical benefits,
learning
from someone's advice is painless.
For example
, parents nowadays
very
often
talk to their
children
about drugs. I
think
it is a great example when one should not try drugs in order to gain new
experience
. I
think
it is a case when
children
must
trust their parents.
To sum up, I
think
it is wise to combine both of these
ways
to learn and try to analyze
personal
mistakes
as well
as not
personal
. I
think
together they can
greatly
simplify one's life and
make
the
way
to success shorter.
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