Being happy brings joy to life. Many people believe that being wealthy means that it provides happiness for sure, but in the real world it is not always guaranteed as the happiness of a person depends on many factors. I agree that a rich person can enjoy his life by opting for luxury things in his life. However, it may not definitely bring happiness to life if he has a poor health condition.
On the one hand, If an individual has a lot of money they can buy the things they want and find satisfaction in it. Nowadays, there are many goods available that bring satisfaction to individuals while using them. Many people feel pleasure in buying the things that excite them and feel happy when they have enough money to buy the commodity. For instance, people who are working in the Information technology field are feeling happy because they earn more salary and they can be able to get anything that they need easily.
On the other hand, Being healthy brings happiness and feel content in the life. If a person is healthy and has enough money to survive his life can guarantee happiness than a person who has a lot of wealth but has a poor health condition. Even though the person has more money, but he cannot enjoy even a single meal or he can be happy if he is suffering from several diseases. For example, Many wealthy people these days are obese and has high sugar levels are always nervous that they might get coronary heart disease.
In conclusion, I agree that having money sufficiently can bring happiness as it provides the pleasure of buying things, but happiness is not guaranteed on wealth as it will depend on other factors as well such as having good health conditions.
Being
happy
brings
joy to
life
.
Many
people
believe that being wealthy means that it provides
happiness
for sure,
but
in the real world it is not always guaranteed as the
happiness
of a
person
depends on
many
factors. I
agree
that a rich
person
can enjoy his
life
by opting for luxury things in his
life
.
However
, it may not definitely
bring
happiness
to
life
if he has a poor health condition.
On the one hand, If an individual has
a lot of
money
they can
buy
the things they want and find satisfaction in it. Nowadays, there are
many
goods
available that
bring
satisfaction to individuals while using them.
Many
people
feel pleasure in buying the things that excite them and feel
happy
when they have
enough
money
to
buy
the commodity.
For instance
,
people
who are working in the Information technology field are feeling
happy
because
they earn more
salary and
they can be able to
get
anything that they need
easily
.
On the other hand
, Being healthy
brings
happiness
and feel content in the
life
. If a
person
is healthy and has
enough
money
to survive his
life
can guarantee
happiness
than a
person
who has
a lot of
wealth
but
has a poor health condition.
Even though
the
person
has more
money
,
but
he cannot enjoy even a single
meal or
he can be
happy
if he is suffering from several diseases.
For example
,
Many
wealthy
people
these days are obese and has high sugar levels are always nervous that they might
get
coronary heart disease.
In conclusion
, I
agree
that having
money
sufficiently
can
bring
happiness
as it provides the pleasure of buying things,
but
happiness
is not guaranteed on wealth as it will depend on other factors
as well
such as having
good
health conditions.
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