Nowadays, criminal activity is a common issue for any nation in the earth and is becoming increasing year by year. A case is an action which constitutes an offence and it is punishable by the law. There are several reasons that individuals lead to infraction such as high rates of unemployment and drugs I believe that authorities can decrease the criminal activities by improving the employment and installing CCTV cameras.
- First of all the population of the earth is becoming higher and higher meaning the increase of starvation and unemployed people. Poverty and bad living condition are a common reason that many individuals commit a case in order to survive. Another problem connected to the felony is the drugs. Illegal traffic of drugs is usually organised by gangs and they control their business with extreme violence.
I believe that crimes can be dealt, of course, by enforcing strict laws such as the sentences for persistent criminals and strengthening the police forces by the government. Improving the employment will also give the chance to
Unemployed people to work and earn their own money resulting the decrease of the felony rate. Installing CCTV cameras to the suspected streets will make the people think twice to commit an infraction. Thus, monitoring the most criminal areas is a good idea.
- To conclude, the significant rise of crimes the last years, start to concern the societies Authorities are the factor which is responsible to minimize this concern.
Nowadays,
criminal
activity is a common issue for any nation in the earth and is becoming increasing year by year. A case is an action which constitutes an
offence
and it is punishable by the law. There are several reasons that individuals lead to infraction such as high rates of unemployment and drugs I believe that authorities can decrease the
criminal
activities by improving the employment and installing CCTV cameras.
-
First of all
the population of the earth is becoming higher and higher meaning the increase of starvation and unemployed
people
. Poverty and
bad
living condition are a common reason that
many
individuals commit a case in order to survive. Another problem connected to the felony is the drugs. Illegal traffic of drugs is
usually
organised
by
gangs and
they control their business with extreme violence.
I believe that crimes can
be dealt
,
of course
, by enforcing strict laws such as the sentences for persistent
criminals
and strengthening the police forces by the
government
. Improving the employment will
also
give the chance to
Unemployed
people
to work and earn their
own
money resulting the decrease of the felony rate. Installing CCTV cameras to the suspected streets will
make
the
people
think
twice to commit an infraction.
Thus
, monitoring the most
criminal
areas is a
good
idea
.
-
To conclude
, the significant rise of crimes the last years,
start
to concern the societies Authorities are the factor which is responsible to minimize this concern.
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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