Nowadays, criminal activity is a common issue for any nation in the earth and is becoming increasing year by year. A case is an action which constitutes an offence and it is punishable by the law. There are several reasons that individuals lead to infraction such as high rates of unemployment and drugs I believe that authorities can decrease the criminal activities by improving the employment and installing CCTV cameras.
- First of all the population of the earth is becoming higher and higher meaning the increase of starvation and unemployed people. Poverty and bad living condition are a common reason that many individuals commit a case in order to survive. Another problem connected to the felony is the drugs. Illegal traffic of drugs is usually organised by gangs and they control their business with extreme violence.
I believe that crimes can be dealt, of course, by enforcing strict laws such as the sentences for persistent criminals and strengthening the police forces by the government. Improving the employment will also give the chance to
Unemployed people to work and earn their own money resulting the decrease of the felony rate. Installing CCTV cameras to the suspected streets will make the people think twice to commit an infraction. Thus, monitoring the most criminal areas is a good idea.
- To conclude, the significant rise of crimes the last years, start to concern the societies Authorities are the factor which is responsible to minimize this concern. 
Nowadays,  
criminal
 activity is a common issue for any nation in the earth and is becoming increasing year by year. A case is an action which constitutes an  
offence
 and it is punishable by the law. There are several reasons that individuals lead to infraction such as high rates of unemployment and drugs I believe that authorities can decrease the  
criminal
 activities by improving the employment and installing CCTV cameras. 
-
  First of all
 the population of the earth is becoming higher and higher meaning the increase of starvation and unemployed  
people
. Poverty and  
bad
 living condition are a common reason that  
many
 individuals commit a case in order to survive. Another problem connected to the felony is the drugs. Illegal traffic of drugs is  
usually
  organised
 by  
gangs and
 they control their business with extreme violence.
I believe that crimes can  
be dealt
,  
of course
, by enforcing strict laws such as the sentences for persistent  
criminals
 and strengthening the police forces by the  
government
. Improving the employment will  
also
 give the chance to
Unemployed  
people
 to work and earn their  
own
 money resulting the decrease of the felony rate. Installing CCTV cameras to the suspected streets will  
make
 the  
people
  think
 twice to commit an infraction.  
Thus
, monitoring the most  
criminal
 areas is a  
good
  idea
. 
-
  To conclude
, the significant rise of crimes the last years,  
start
 to concern the societies Authorities are the factor which is responsible to minimize this concern. 
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