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You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company. In your letter, you should tell: •why you ride a bicycle to work•what the problem is with the parking•what your sugge v.4

You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company. In your letter, you should tell: •why you ride a bicycle to work•what the problem is with the parking•what your sugge v. 4
Dear Manager, I am writing to inform you that since last week, I faced a problem at the parking where I park my bike, while I attend to work during the week. I live next to my workplace 15 minutes far by bicycle, that’s why I prefer to ride my bike. The reason is, there will be more free space to park and avoid traffic congestion. Coming by car need more time and car parking costs more than 50 pound per day. The problem that I’m facing at the parking is that, each day when I leave work, I find the lock is scratched, and my rear wheel is down, as if someone trying to steal it. I asked the employment there if he saw anyone doing this, but he told me that none can access the lot without his permission. I would like from your side, to permit met access the cameras at the security room, to check if someone is trying to steal the bicycle. Thank you for your time, hope hearing from you soon and take this issue into consideration. Sincerely Yours,
Dear Manager,

I am writing to inform you that since last week, I faced a problem at the parking where I park my bike, while I attend to work during the week.

I
live
next
to my workplace 15 minutes far by bicycle, that’s why I prefer to ride my bike. The reason is, there will be more free space to park and avoid traffic congestion. Coming by car need more time and car parking costs more than
50 pound
per day.

The problem that I’m facing at the parking is that, each day when I
leave
work, I find the lock
is scratched
, and my rear wheel is down, as if someone trying to steal it. I asked the employment there if he
saw
anyone doing this,
but
he
told
me that none can access the lot without his permission.

I would like from your side, to permit met access the cameras at the security room, to
check
if someone is trying to steal the bicycle.

Thank you for your time, hope hearing from you
soon
and take this issue into consideration.

Sincerely
Yours,
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company. In your letter, you should tell: •why you ride a bicycle to work•what the problem is with the parking•what your sugge v. 4

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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