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You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town However the meal and the service were terrible The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem so you left without a resolution State what pro v.1

You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town However the meal and the service were terrible The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem so you left without a resolution State what pro v. 1
It is considered that the Internet may be used to replace teachers in the future. Although I agree that the Internet play a very important role in studying these days, I suppose that teachers are still indispensable to the education. On the one hand, it is clear that the Internet definitely have some several benefits for learning. Students may have the opportunity to reach to a wide array of knowledge, which is considered as an unlimited source. For instant, there are myriad websites on the Internet that students can search for references such as subjects at school, individual assignments, and sample presentations. Learning through useful websites is more convenient than attending to face-to-face classes. To illustrate, people can access to the networks effortlessly at home and browse the needed information instead of commuting to school for joining long lessons which are last for hours. On the other hand, I believe that teachers are an integral part of the education's development. Firstly, educators who have a depth knowledge are reliable people to select the accurate information for teaching. For example, History is a subject whose students find the difficulty to study because of long and detailed stories. Therefore, it will assist learners to memorize well if the lessons are summarized intellectually and logically by penetrative understanding teachers. Secondly, it is a productive way for students to interact directly with lecturers. Some students, especially those finding difficulties when doing Math problems, may require teachers for assistance such as giving feedback and suggesting solutions. To conclude, it is true that the Internet has obvious advantages in learning. I believe that teachers still have an essential role in the development of education.
It
is considered
that the Internet may be
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used
to replace
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teachers
in the future. Although I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that the Internet play a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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important
role in studying these days, I suppose that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
are
still
indispensable to the education.

On the one hand, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that the Internet definitely have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
several benefits for learning.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Students
may have the opportunity to reach to a wide array of knowledge, which
is considered
as an unlimited source. For instant, there are myriad websites on the Internet that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
can search for references such as subjects at school, individual assignments, and sample presentations. Learning through useful websites is more convenient than attending to face-to-face classes. To illustrate,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can access to the networks
effortlessly
at home and browse the needed information
instead
of commuting to school for joining long lessons which are last for hours.

On the other hand
, I believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
are an integral part of the education's development.
Firstly
, educators who have a depth knowledge are reliable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to select the accurate information for teaching.
For example
, History is a subject whose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
find the difficulty to study
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of long and detailed stories.
Therefore
, it will assist learners to memorize well if the lessons
are summarized
intellectually
and
logically
by penetrative understanding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
.
Secondly
, it is a productive way for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to interact
directly
with lecturers.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
,
especially
those finding difficulties when doing Math problems, may require
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
for assistance such as giving feedback and suggesting solutions.

To conclude
, it is true that the Internet has obvious advantages in learning. I believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
still
have an essential role in the development of education.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town However the meal and the service were terrible The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem so you left without a resolution State what pro v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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