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A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was importanthow the book helped you. v.1

A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was importanthow the book helped you. v. 1
Some people believe that instead of wasted spending on wildlife conservation, governments should focus only on the human population. I personally agree with this idea for the following two reasons. Firstly, poverty and starvation are still global issues which the entire humankind has been facing for decades. In certain developing countries, the government has a limited budget and human resources to allocate for the key fields such as education, health care and food manufacturing to meet domestic demands. A tremendous amount of effort and wealth are required to invest in such areas to accomplish the target. Without the firmed infrastructure, the countries cannot get rid of the problem entirely. In order words, they cannot spare any amount of their resources taking care of wild animal’s lives. Secondly, limited habitat is also another significant problem needed to be addressed in the contemporary world where the human population is booming. People have witnessed the exponential growth of birth rate in recent year due to the progress of medical and healthcare development, which means there will not be enough dwelling in the future. Undoubtedly, leading nations should focus their expenditures on researching into another habitable planet as a backup. On top of that, the authorities should make the most of the current space by coming up with proper civilized planning such as high-rise complex, underground cities. Such plans may devour a huge amount of fortune and time. In conclusion, with the above mentioned reasons, I strongly argue that all resources should be exploited for the sake of human demand and development.
Some
people
believe that
instead
of wasted spending on wildlife conservation,
governments
should focus
only
on the
human
population. I
personally
agree
with this
idea
for the following two reasons.

Firstly
, poverty and starvation are
still
global issues which the entire humankind has been facing for decades. In certain
developing countries
, the
government
has a limited budget and
human
resources to allocate for the key fields such as education, health care and food manufacturing to
meet
domestic demands. A tremendous amount of effort and wealth
are required
to invest in such areas to accomplish the target. Without the firmed infrastructure, the countries cannot
get
rid of the problem
entirely
. In order words, they cannot spare any amount of their resources taking care of wild animal’s
lives
.

Secondly
, limited habitat is
also
another significant problem needed to
be addressed
in the contemporary world where the
human
population is booming.
People
have witnessed the exponential growth of birth rate in recent year due to the progress of medical and healthcare development, which means there will not be
enough
dwelling in the future.
Undoubtedly
, leading nations should focus their expenditures on researching into another habitable planet as a backup.
On top of that
, the authorities should
make
the most of the
current
space by coming up with proper civilized planning such as high-rise complex, underground cities. Such plans may devour a huge amount of fortune and time.

In conclusion
, with the above mentioned reasons, I
strongly
argue that all resources should
be exploited
for the sake of
human
demand and development.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was importanthow the book helped you. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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