Competitiveness is one of the common factors to boost someone's productivity. The competitiveness among students can be encouraged or discouraged depending on the situation and the outcome. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both scenarios on this serious matter.
School students should be motivated to compete with other students so that they can take it as a challenge resulting the improvement in the performance of an individual throughout a calendar year. With the help of this sort of environment, A school can prosper with their students. For example, In third world countries competition between students and professionals gets importance because of their great result in terms of increase in productivity and motivation of an individual.
If too much importance will be given to the competing environment than it might lead to the increase in numbers of suicide of an individual. With the introduction of competing among any sector, A person can have a desire to take his own life after loosing that competition. For instance, In first world countries, In many schools, positioning criteria in an exam has been discontinued to limit the competition concept which was leading to the suicide, depression and other illness.
To sum up, Competition should be encouraged which leads to greater results in any walk of the life. However, It is completely depends on the person or organization either they take it positively or negatively like to increase the productivity, motivation of a person or to pressurize someone too much leading to the depression or other illness.
Competitiveness is one of the common factors to boost someone's productivity. The competitiveness among
students
can
be encouraged
or discouraged depending on the situation and the outcome. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both scenarios on this serious matter.
School
students
should
be motivated
to compete with other
students
so
that they can take it as a challenge resulting the improvement in the performance of an individual throughout a calendar year. With the
help
of this sort of environment, A school can prosper with their
students
.
For example
, In third world
countries
competition
between
students
and professionals
gets
importance
because
of their great result in terms of increase in productivity and motivation of an individual.
If
too much importance will be
given
to the competing environment than it might lead to the increase in numbers of suicide of an individual. With the introduction of competing among any sector, A person can have a desire to take his
own
life after loosing that
competition
.
For instance
, In
first
world countries, In
many
schools, positioning criteria in an exam has
been discontinued
to limit the
competition
concept which was leading to the suicide, depression and other illness.
To sum up,
Competition
should
be encouraged
which leads to greater results in any walk of the life.
However
, It is completely depends on the person or organization either they take it
positively
or
negatively
like to increase the productivity, motivation of a person or to pressurize someone too much
leading
to the depression or other illness.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes