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You left your watch at friend's home and you want him to send it back. writer him a letter. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your watchtell him where you left it atsuggest what he can do about it. v.1

You left your watch at friend's home and you want him to send it back. writer him a letter. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your watchtell him where you left it atsuggest what he can do about it. v. 1
Pollution and travel congestion have become one of the biggest threats in the cities as well as in motorways. Simply, increasing the prices of gasoline is not the way to tackle these problems. This essay will discuss the constituents, why elevating the cost of oil is not the solution to solve the transportation congestion and pollution issues? And what effective steps should be taken to encounter these cruxes? To begin with, pollution and growing traffic have become one of the crucial issues in urban areas. Increasing the prices of gasoline is not enough to solve these issues because it might affect the local cost of public transit. For instance, the study suggests that almost 15% of the world public transit depending on the prices of petrol, increasing the price of petrol put a direct effect on the fare of local transportation. Overall, raising the price of oil will not solve this obstacle, but it will create another complication which is inflation. Firstly, the cleaner fuel needs to be developed which will solve the pollution problems. For instance, the research study has been carried out which suggest that using a cleaner fuel can cause the complete combustion in engines of various cars and buses which will not create a black smoke in the atmosphere. Secondly, the awareness should be made among the public about using local transport because it will cause a major reduction in private transport. For example, In Japan, the traffic congestion problem is not significant because of using local transport instead of private transport. Therefore, cleaner fluids and usage of public transport can help to tackle these problems. In conclusion, pollution and traffic problem have become the headache for people who lives in the city. This essay has discussed how raising the price of oil is not the solution to decrease these issues and the measures like clean gasoline and usage of local transport can be proved beneficial to curb these problems.
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Pollution
and travel congestion have become one of the biggest threats in the cities
as well
as in motorways.
Simply
, increasing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
of gasoline is not the way to tackle these
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problems
. This essay will discuss the constituents, why elevating the cost of oil is not the solution to
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solve
the transportation congestion and
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pollution
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issues
? And what effective steps should
be taken
to encounter these cruxes?

To
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begin
with,
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pollution
and growing traffic have become one of the crucial
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issues
in urban areas. Increasing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
of gasoline is not
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enough
to
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solve
these
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issues
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because
it might affect the
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local
cost of
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public
transit.
For instance
, the study suggests that almost 15% of the world
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public
transit depending on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
of petrol, increasing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
of petrol put a direct effect on the fare of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
transportation.
Overall
, raising the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
of oil will not
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solve
this obstacle,
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but
it will create another complication which is inflation.

Firstly
, the cleaner fuel needs to
be developed
which will
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solve
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
.
For instance
, the research study has
been carried
out which suggest that using a cleaner fuel can cause the complete combustion in engines of various cars and buses which will not create a black smoke in the atmosphere.
Secondly
, the awareness should
be made
among the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
about using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it will cause a major reduction in private
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transport
.
For example
, In Japan, the traffic congestion
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problem
is not significant
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of using
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local
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transport
instead
of private
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transport
.
Therefore
, cleaner fluids and usage of
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public
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transport
can
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help
to tackle these problems.

In conclusion
,
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pollution
and traffic
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problem
have become the headache for
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people
who
Did you mean "live"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'people' should be used.
lives
in the city. This essay has discussed how raising the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
of oil is not the solution to decrease these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
and the measures like clean gasoline and usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
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transport
can
be proved
beneficial to curb these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay You left your watch at friend's home and you want him to send it back. writer him a letter. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your watchtell him where you left it atsuggest what he can do about it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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