Pets have lived with human since ancient time. They have supported us to do agriculture and be a friend. But some people dispute that pets are not clean, that they should not live together with us. In this essay I want to argue that pets can live together with human. They can be part of our family and reduce the loneliness of some people.
Cleanliness is very important. Many popular pets, such as a dog or cat, usually want to go outside and come with dirtiness because they likely to play with grass and soil, there are their nature of them. For instance, my cat like to go to my courtyard of my house and sometime it has dirt as well as insect attach with their fur. Therefore, it is my responsibility to clean my cat after its comeback. Pets would not because of disease or bacteria if it was clean.
My cat is as one of my family and every people like to play with. However, my grandmother may be the one who loves the most because everyday other people have to go to work, therefore it has only my cat that live with her. There are a lot of researches that explain pets can decrease our depression or Alzheimer for older people. At lease, my grandmother will not feel lonely because she has the cat stay with her.
In conclusion, I believe that have a pet in the family have some advantages, not only be a friend, but also mitigate some mental illness that cause of depression or other mental disease.
Pets
have
lived
with human since ancient time. They have supported us to do agriculture and be a friend.
But
some
people
dispute that
pets
are not clean, that they should not
live
together with us. In this essay I want to argue that
pets
can
live
together with human. They can be part of our family and
reduce
the loneliness of
some
people
.
Cleanliness is
very
important
.
Many
popular
pets
, such as a dog or cat,
usually
want to go outside and
come
with dirtiness
because
they likely to play with grass and soil, there are their nature of them.
For instance
, my cat like to go to my courtyard of my
house
and sometime it has dirt
as well
as insect attach with their fur.
Therefore
, it is my responsibility to clean my cat after its comeback.
Pets
would not
because
of disease or bacteria if it was clean.
My cat is as one of my family and every
people
like to play with.
However
, my grandmother may be the one who
loves
the most
because
everyday other
people
have to
go to work,
therefore
it has
only
my cat that
live
with her. There are
a lot of
researches that
explain
pets
can decrease our depression or Alzheimer for older
people
. At lease, my grandmother will not feel lonely
because
she has the cat stay with her.
In conclusion
, I believe that have a pet in the family have
some
advantages, not
only
be a friend,
but
also
mitigate
some
mental illness that cause of depression or other mental disease.
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