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You have recently ordered an item through the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. write to the company. In your letter-describe what you purchasedexplain why you are not happy with the purchasetell them what you would like them to do about the si v.1

You have recently ordered an item through the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. write to the company. In your letter-describe what you purchasedexplain why you are not happy with the purchasetell them what you would like them to do about the si v. 1
Global warming and its growing impact on human beings has made it imperative to work on improving the environment. It is generally believed, that only government and large companies can make a difference to improve the environment. I strongly disagree with this stance and in my opinion, each and every individual can play its role to bring a positive impact on the environment. Government can make a difference in improving the environment by not only devising rules, policies and standards, but by also ensuring the enforcement of the decided policies in the country by penalizing the culprits, who violate these laws. Large companies on the other hand, can play their role by implementing those policies. For example, if the government has imposed a ban on dumping an industrial waste in the sea water. It is duty of large companies to follow the rules and avoid the violation. Contrary to this, an individual can also play an important role in making a huge impact on the environment, by avoiding a plethora of factors that can have a negative effect on the environment. It is pertinent to note that the government policies can never be successful, if we as an individual do not adopt them in our daily lives. Individuals can change their habits and behavioural preferences, such as avoiding the use of plastic products, habit of throwing the litter in the bin, ensuring recycling of re-usable products, avoiding noise pollution, or alike, to make a fruitful and positive impact on the environment. In conclusion, I believe that people who disagreed with the statement have flawed understanding. I disagree that only government and large companies can make a difference on the environment. In my opinion, it is important to realize the every individual has a capacity and capability to produce a positive impact on the environment, provided they are encouraged or enforced to so.
Global warming and its growing
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impact
on human beings has made it imperative to work on improving the
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environment
. It is
generally
believed, that
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only
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government
and
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large
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companies
can
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make
a difference to
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improve
the
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environment
. I
strongly
disagree with this stance and in my opinion, each and every
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individual
can play its role to bring a
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positive
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impact
on the environment.

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Government
can
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make
a difference in improving the
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environment
by not
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only
devising
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rules
,
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policies
and standards,
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but
by
also
ensuring the enforcement of the decided
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policies
in the country by penalizing the culprits, who violate these laws.
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Large
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companies
on the other hand
, can play their role by implementing those
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policies
.
For example
, if the
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government
has imposed a ban on dumping an industrial waste in the sea water. It is duty of
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large
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companies
to follow the
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rules
and avoid the violation.

Contrary to this, an
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individual
can
also
play an
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important
role in making a huge
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impact
on the
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environment
, by avoiding a plethora of factors that can have a
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negative
effect on the
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environment
. It is pertinent to note that the
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government
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policies
can never be successful, if we as an
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individual
do not adopt them in our daily
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lives
.
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Individuals
can
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change
their habits and
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behavioural
preferences, such as avoiding the
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use
of plastic products, habit of throwing the litter in the bin, ensuring recycling of re-usable products, avoiding noise pollution, or alike, to
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make
a fruitful and
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positive
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impact
on the environment.

In conclusion
, I believe that
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people
who disagreed with the statement have flawed understanding. I disagree that
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only
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government
and
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large
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
can
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make
a difference on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. In my opinion, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to realize the every
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individual
has a capacity and capability to produce a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
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impact
on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
, provided they
are encouraged
or enforced to
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so
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay You have recently ordered an item through the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. write to the company. In your letter-describe what you purchasedexplain why you are not happy with the purchasetell them what you would like them to do about the si v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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