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You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was damaged. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In your letter: give details about the order you madeexplain what was wrong with the itemtell the company what you want them t v.1

You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was damaged. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In your letter: give details about the order you madeexplain what was wrong with the itemtell the company what you want them t v. 1
With the advent of technology, it has become cheaper and safer to tour abroad than ever before in the history of mankind, and this has given rise to multi-billion travel and tourism industry. Although some people opine that international travelling has created tension and intolerance among people, I am of the firm opinion that tourism is promoting cultural understanding and mutual respect in people’s lives. When people travel outside their own country, they encounter people, which have a different set of beliefs and values than their own. This change led them to think why people of different origins are behaving in a certain way. Foreigners or tourists sit with local people and ask them questions about their life and in result they understand their culture and way of life. For instance, many westerners find it surprising when they see joint family culture in Asian countries like India and China. Later on this change not only broaden their horizon, but also create respect of local people’s value and tradition in the eyes of tourists. Tourism not only build cultural understanding, but also tolerance among people from different countries. When people travel abroad to attend sports events like world football cup, world cricket tournament, they sit next to their rivals. In such events, people can release their patriotic emotions of their country in the safest and constructive away through chanting and shouting. At the end of the match both teams and audience appreciate each other effort, and this leads to tolerance and mutual respect. To conclude, international tourism has become a giant industry of modern times. While some people consider that mixing of people from different origin is destructive and unhealthy, I opine that travelling abroad is leading to cultural understating, and tolerance in the lives of the public.
With the advent of technology, it has become cheaper and safer to tour abroad than ever
before
in the history of mankind, and this has
given
rise to multi-billion travel and tourism industry. Although
some
people
opine that international travelling has created tension and intolerance among
people
, I am of the firm opinion that tourism is promoting cultural understanding and mutual respect in
people’s
lives
.

When
people
travel outside their
own
country
, they encounter
people
, which have a
different
set of beliefs and values than their
own
. This
change
led them to
think
why
people
of
different
origins are behaving in a certain way. Foreigners or tourists sit with local
people
and ask them questions about their life and in result they understand their culture and way of life.
For instance
,
many
westerners find it surprising when they
see
joint family culture in Asian
countries
like India and China. Later on this
change
not
only
broaden their horizon,
but
also
create respect of local
people’s
value and tradition in the eyes of tourists.

Tourism not
only
build cultural understanding,
but
also
tolerance among
people
from
different
countries
. When
people
travel abroad to attend sports
events
like world football cup, world cricket tournament, they sit
next
to their rivals. In such
events
,
people
can release their patriotic emotions of their
country
in the safest and constructive away through chanting and shouting. At the
end
of the match both teams and audience appreciate each other effort, and this leads to tolerance and mutual respect.

To conclude
, international tourism has become a giant industry of modern times. While
some
people
consider that mixing of
people
from
different
origin is destructive and unhealthy, I opine that travelling abroad is leading to cultural understating, and tolerance in the
lives
of the public.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was damaged. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In your letter: give details about the order you madeexplain what was wrong with the itemtell the company what you want them t v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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