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you have brought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago, but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: Intro v.1

you have brought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago, but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: Intro v. 1
The frequency of people migrating to cities, increasing each day. Unemployment tends the student graduates to move to hamlet, others to study. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of moving to a town. A huge number of young people from various rural areas are shifting to the urban because of less infrastructure and development in their hometown for a study they could not have skilled teachers good equipment in rural areas. For instance, considering the ratio of people coming into the metropolitan is gradually raised to the one-third population of the urban sector. When compared to past years. If a student moves to the developed area can get good opportunity job opportunities chance of attending higher studies working at a higher company and can get an eligible job with handsome pay in all cases it could not work out or similar. These days migrating to a city could make one beneficial, but this may not repeat or similar to each other for example job-seeker came to a city of job, but he could not do it in return he must pay his living expenses. For students, it will be difficult to get a chance in higher standard universities because of the cut-throat competition several youngsters are facing different for several types of issues related to their career in the metropolitan even they could not make perfect food for themselves as compared to rural areas. In conclusion, I think that it is important to move to an industrial region for better chances even the difficulties faced by youngsters. But they can achieve big. I clearly believe that advantages can outweigh the disadvantages for the one who could make it possible.
The frequency of
people
migrating to cities, increasing each day. Unemployment tends the student graduates to
move
to hamlet, others to study. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of moving to a town.

A huge number of young
people
from various rural areas are shifting to the urban
because
of less infrastructure and development in their hometown for a study they could not have skilled teachers
good
equipment in rural areas.
For instance
, considering the ratio of
people
coming into the metropolitan is
gradually
raised to the one-third population of the urban sector. When compared to past years. If a student
moves
to the developed area can
get
good
opportunity job opportunities chance of attending higher studies working at a higher
company
and can
get
an eligible job with handsome pay in all cases it could not work out or similar.

These days migrating to a city could
make
one beneficial,
but
this may not repeat or similar to each other
for example
job-seeker came to a city of job,
but
he could not do it in return he
must
pay his living expenses. For students, it will be difficult to
get
a chance in higher standard universities
because
of the
cut
-throat competition several youngsters are facing
different
for several types of issues related to their career in the metropolitan even they could not
make
perfect food for themselves as compared to rural areas.

In conclusion
, I
think
that it is
important
to
move
to an industrial region for better chances even the difficulties faced by youngsters.
But
they can achieve
big
. I
clearly
believe that advantages can outweigh the disadvantages for the one who could
make
it possible.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay you have brought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago, but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: Intro v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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