Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v.1

You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v. 1
Nowadays, the debate whether the educational pros of testing outweigh any cons or not has caused a ruckus among myriads of citizens. Those who are in favour of this shift believe that it enables the parents to regularly review their children's academic level; however opponents disagree-claiming that it may overstress students. This essay will discuss both the benefits and the drawbacks for tests and examinations. There is a vast plethora of merits regarding this disputatious issue. First and foremost, not only does it keep the parents constantly updated with their children's academic level at school, but it also enables teachers to know who is paying attention at class and who's not. Although it may seem hectic and time consuming for teachers to keep correcting all these exams, it is beneficial to help the students to net some A*s on their paper. Another benefit is that honestly students are coerced to study harder during exam days. For example, if exams have not existed, students would not have gone the extra mile to reach their zenith of success! Despite the obvious positives, one cannot turn a blind eye on the incontestable negatives. The first and the most salient one is that some students may find it superfluous to keep stressing over school exams especially in the beginning of the academic year. Even though it might seem back breaking burden to study the lesson every time they have an exam, this checkup will definitely make studying for the final exam a lot easier. Another drawback is that students may find exams wasting their time because there will not be enough time to study what they have taken at school daily. That is to say that according to many researches, it has been stated that students should learn how to manage their time effectively and set their priorities. To take all points into consideration, I fervently acquiesce that its pros, without negotiation outnumber its cons, because regular checkups is the bedrock of success to know exactly where every student stands. On the other hand, I also recommend that teachers should not set many exams in order not to put pressure on students.
Nowadays, the debate whether the educational pros of testing outweigh any cons or not has caused a ruckus among myriads of citizens. Those who are in
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
of this shift believe that it enables the parents to
regularly
review their children's academic level;
however
opponents disagree-claiming that it may
Possible spelling mistake found.
overstress
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. This essay will discuss both the benefits and the drawbacks for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tests
and examinations.

There is a vast plethora of merits regarding this disputatious issue.
First
and foremost, not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
does it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the parents
constantly
updated with their children's academic level at school,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it
also
enables teachers to know who is paying attention at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and who's not. Although it may seem hectic and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
time consuming
for teachers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
correcting all these exams, it is beneficial to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to net
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Replace by the typographical symbol.
A*s
on their paper. Another benefit is that
honestly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
are coerced
to study harder during exam days.
For example
, if exams have not existed,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
would not have gone the extra mile to reach their zenith of success!

Despite the obvious positives, one cannot turn a blind eye on the incontestable negatives. The
first
and the most salient one is that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
may find it superfluous to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
stressing over school exams
especially
in the beginning of the academic year.
Even though
it might seem back breaking burden to study the lesson every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
they have an exam, this checkup will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
studying for the final exam a lot easier. Another drawback is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
may find exams wasting their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there will not be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to study what they have taken at school daily.
That is
to say that according to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
researches, it has
been stated
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
should learn how to manage their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
effectively
and set their priorities.

To take all points into consideration, I
fervently
acquiesce that its pros, without negotiation outnumber its cons,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
regular checkups is the bedrock of success to know exactly where every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
stands.
On the other hand
, I
also
recommend that teachers should not set
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
exams in order not to put pressure on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
358 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts