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You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems v.1

You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems v. 1
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about the problems I have been facing in my work in recent days. Firstly, I am the senior resource in this project, where I can see that people who joined here recently are trying to find out even the smallest mistakes in my work and making efforts to push the complex part of their work to me. Moreover, they are not taking responsibility any of their tasks, in which, I can clearly see that they are trying to blame me for their mistakes, saying that the knowledge transfer is not given properly. Because of this, I have to finish their tasks and leave late, resulting in many inconveniences while commuting. In addition to that, I feel that I am not getting to spend enough quality time with my family. If I continue to work late hours daily, it may affect my health as well. So, it will be comfortable for me, if I can finish my tasks and leave around 5 pm, which gives me enough time to reach home and help my son in his studies. This arrangement will relieve me from the stress and lead to the development of the project knowledge as well. So, I request you to speak to all the members of the team, about the responsibilities they have to take and the areas of the project they have to explore and understand better. This will help not only me, but all the team members to have a balance between personal and professional life. Hope you understand my problem and take necessary action immediately. Yours faithfully, Reshma Gangadharan
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the problems I have been facing in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in recent days.

Firstly
, I am the senior resource in this project, where I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
here recently are trying to find out even the smallest mistakes in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and making efforts to push the complex part of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
to me.
Moreover
, they are not taking responsibility any of their tasks, in which, I can
clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that they are trying to blame me for their mistakes, saying that the knowledge transfer is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
properly
.
Because of this
, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
finish their tasks and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
late, resulting in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
inconveniences while commuting.
In addition
to that, I feel that I am not getting to spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
quality time with my family.

If I continue to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
late hours daily, it may affect my health
as well
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, it will be comfortable for me, if I can finish my tasks and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
around 5 pm, which gives me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time to reach home and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
my son in his studies. This arrangement will relieve me from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
and lead to the development of the project knowledge
as well
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I request you to speak to all the members of the team, about the responsibilities they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take and the areas of the project they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
explore and understand better. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
me,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
all the team members to have a balance between personal and professional life.

Hope you understand my problem and take necessary action immediately.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Reshma
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Gangadharan
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems v. 1

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
272 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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