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These days many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning why is this happening What can be done to help young people to leave school with more positive attitude towards learning v.2

These days many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning why is this happening What can be done to help young people to leave school with more positive attitude towards learning v. 2
Education is part and parcel in the every one life, but, nowadays many youngster had been leaved in the school with a bad attitude towards learning. How I can solve that situation; and, how to built up optimistic attitude of teenager towards education? I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that authorities could be implement to curb the negative attitude of student about learning. To begin with, various studies have been proven that teachers are responsible for this situation, because, tutor is motivating only intelligent student and encourage a confident level, however, the weak children had been realized that teacher was not being concentrate own his problems, so teenager have been lose the confident level in the classroom. They do not have concentrate and understand on his study. The best epitome of this is the survey was conducted by Hindustan times in Delhi school, so believe that seventy per centum student grown- up negative behavior for education. Besides, reason for that teacher is misbehaviour towards children. Moreover, there is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes, however, one option has to be to do counseling of school tutor on every Saturday, how to tackle the student behavior in the classroom and slump interest of student in the study. In addition to this, bad company is highly effective on teenager behavior; groupism so, that reason to get rid of student concentration for education. The large number of student were took drugs in the school time. It was bad impact on the health of teenager. Children have been preffered enjoyment in school time, but, a lot of teenager could be implement to drugs like a hobbie. In the past time, drug-addiction department was conducted survey in the state of Punjab school; that is observed a large number of student took a drug in teenager, so that reason do not have positive attitude towards learning this would be the perfect example of this. In conclusion, there are plethora of different factors that led to positive rose in the student for education, while, it may not be possible solution of this, this could probably solved by authorities. The governor- agencies. Will making a rule and regulations for build up optimistic behavior of children is responsibility of teacher. " Tutor is give a equality of god, so teacher is highly helpful to motivate and encourage confident level of youngsters towards learning.
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, nowadays
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had
been leaved
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school
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bad
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attitude
towards learning. How I can solve that situation; and, how to built up optimistic
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attitude
of
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teenager
towards
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education
? I will examine the possible
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reasons
for this trend and suggest
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some of the
practical policies that authorities could be
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implement
to curb the
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negative
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attitude
of
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student
about learning.

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begin
with, various studies have
been proven
that
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teachers
are responsible for this situation,
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because
, tutor is motivating
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only
intelligent
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student
and encourage a confident level,
however
, the weak
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children
had
been realized
that
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teacher
was not being concentrate
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own
his problems,
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so
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teenager
have been
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lose
the confident level in the classroom. They do not have concentrate and understand on his study. The best epitome of this is the survey
was conducted
by Hindustan
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times
in Delhi
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school
,
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so
believe that seventy per centum
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student
grown- up
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negative
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behavior
for
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education
.
Besides
,
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reason
for that
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teacher
is
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misbehaviour
towards
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children
.
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, there is almost
certainly
no one solution to this problem
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given
the complexity of its causes,
however
, one option
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has to
be to
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of
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school
tutor on every Saturday, how to tackle the
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student
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behavior
in the classroom and slump interest of
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student
in the study.

In addition
to this,
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bad
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company
is
highly
effective on
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teenager
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behavior
;
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groupism
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so
, that
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reason
to
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get
rid of
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student
concentration for
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education
. The large number of
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student
were took drugs in the
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school
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time
. It was
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bad
impact on the health of
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teenager
.
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Children
have been
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preffered
enjoyment in
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school
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time
,
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but
,
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a lot of
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teenager
could be
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implement
to drugs like a
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hobbie
. In the past
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time
, drug-addiction department
was conducted
survey in the state of Punjab
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school
; that
is observed
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a large number of
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student
took a drug in
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teenager
,
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so
that
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reason
do not have
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positive
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attitude
towards learning this would be the perfect example of this.

In conclusion
, there are plethora of
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different
factors that led to
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positive
rose in the
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student
for
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education
, while, it may not be possible solution of this, this could
probably
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solved
by authorities. The governor- agencies. Will making a
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rule
and regulations for build up optimistic
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behavior
of
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children
is responsibility of
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teacher
.
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a
equality of god,
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so
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teacher
is
highly
helpful to motivate and encourage confident level of youngsters towards learning.
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51Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay These days many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning why is this happening What can be done to help young people to leave school with more positive attitude towards learning v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
412 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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