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These days many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning why is this happening What can be done to help young people to leave school with more positive attitude towards learning v.1

These days many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning why is this happening What can be done to help young people to leave school with more positive attitude towards learning v. 1
Household waste is becoming a major problem in people’s life, since it is not recycled properly. Currently, many speak about the necessity of involving the authorities by declaring it as a law to increment the garbage makes as reusable. This essay will narrate how to apply a law to make community to recycle well their own waste than earlier. There are so many factors engaged with not recycling home waste abundantly. People are used to throw away their garbage everywhere without considering the health and environmental damages. It is worth that find out the reasons for why the society behaves as carelessly. It maybe they are not educated of environment protection, Hygiene precautions, lack of time and more. As an example, we can see many people throw their household wastes besides the roads while they are travelling. Therefore, it is a must to find a solution for these unethical habits. Over the years the government and people are searching solutions for this severe problem. Finally, most of them are requesting a legal action which has to take by government to encourage the community to get more reusing procedures for waste. Then only the people adhere to recycling their garbage without creating issues. For example, if there is a way that authority can fine the people who are not obedient to the rules, then automatically society will align with the recycling by themselves. There are many ways to recycle house wastes. We can categorize them and can produce it to compost from some. Others can sell to who do recycling industrially. People can gain some money from it also. All this is because of the law against of the rule breakers. In conclusion, Unless the authority fails to involve in creating laws against the people who are not following waste reusing mechanisms, it will be a huge problem in near future.
Household
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waste
is becoming a major problem in
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people’s
life, since it is not recycled
properly
.
Currently
,
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many
speak about the necessity of involving the authorities by declaring it as a
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law
to increment the garbage
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makes
as reusable. This essay will narrate how to apply a
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law
to
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make
community to recycle well their
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own
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waste
than earlier.

There are
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so
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many
factors engaged with not
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recycling
home
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waste
abundantly
.
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People
are
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used
to throw away their garbage everywhere without considering the health and environmental damages. It is worth that find out the reasons for why the society behaves as
carelessly
. It maybe they are not educated of environment protection, Hygiene precautions, lack of time and more. As an example, we can
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see
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many
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people
throw their household
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wastes
besides
the roads while they are travelling.
Therefore
, it is a
After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.
must to
find a solution for these unethical habits.

Over the years the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and
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people
are searching solutions for this severe problem.
Finally
, most of them are requesting a legal action which
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has to
take by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to encourage the community to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more reusing procedures for
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waste
. Then
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only
the
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people
adhere to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
their garbage without creating issues.
For example
, if there is a way that authority can fine the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who are not obedient to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
, then
automatically
society will align with the
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recycling
by themselves. There are
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many
ways to recycle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
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wastes
. We can categorize them and can produce it to compost from
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some
. Others can sell to
Did you mean "whom"?
who
do
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recycling
industrially
.
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People
can gain
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some
money from it
also
. All this is
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because
of the
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law
against of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
breakers.

In conclusion
, Unless the authority fails to involve in creating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
against the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who are not following
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
reusing mechanisms, it will be a huge problem in near future.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay These days many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning why is this happening What can be done to help young people to leave school with more positive attitude towards learning v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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