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You are studying in a college and your friend recently asked your opinion about it. Write a letter to your friend explaining the college and giving your recommendations. In your letter, include: why did you apply for admission to this college? what do you lik v.2

You are studying in a college and your friend recently asked your opinion about it. Write a letter to your friend explaining the college and giving your recommendations. In your letter, include: why did you apply for admission to this college? what do you lik v. 2
Dear John, I am really happy to get a letter from your end after almost 2 years, and I am amaze to know that you are seeking my help in pursuing your master degree. Well, I have taken admission in A& M Management college because of its reputation and cost of the course. As you might know that my college has ranked 18th in QS survey last year. Moreover, it will cost me only Rs. 20 lacs to complete my degree including my accommodation. The best part of this college is the teaching methodology and professors behavior. We can ask numerous questions on semester courses, and they always response properly. Needless to say, the hostel facilities are the best in the country (as per QS survey). However, course contents are rigorously packed; one can hardly find free time to do extra activities. I believe this is good, as they are preparing us for tough professional careers. If your GMAT score is more than 650, you must apply without any hesitation. Furthermore, you can give my reference in filling up the application form, which will be beneficial in getting shortlisted. Hope, I can clarify all you doubt about my college! I will wait to see you in the next term. Best regards, Bibhu Kalita
Dear John,

I am
really
happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a letter from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
after almost 2 years, and I am amaze to know that

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
you
are seeking my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in pursuing your master degree. Well, I have taken admission in
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A&amp
; M Management college
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because
of its reputation and cost of the course.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you might know that my college has ranked 18th in QS survey last year.
Moreover
, it will cost me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
Rs. 20
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lacs
to complete my degree including my accommodation.

The best part of this college is the teaching methodology and professors behavior. We can ask numerous questions on semester courses, and they always
Did you mean "respond"?
response
properly
. Needless to say, the hostel facilities are the best in the country (as per QS survey).
However
, course contents are
rigorously
packed; one can hardly find free time to do extra activities. I believe this is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
, as they are preparing us for tough professional careers.

If your GMAT score is more than 650, you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
apply without any hesitation.
Furthermore
, you can give my reference in filling up the application form, which will be beneficial in getting shortlisted.

Hope, I can clarify all you doubt about my college! I will wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you in the
next
term.

Best regards,

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Bibhu
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Kalita
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS essay You are studying in a college and your friend recently asked your opinion about it. Write a letter to your friend explaining the college and giving your recommendations. In your letter, include: why did you apply for admission to this college? what do you lik v. 2

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
212 words
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