Dear John,
I am really happy to get a letter from your end after almost 2 years, and I am amaze to know that
you are seeking my help in pursuing your master degree. Well, I have taken admission in A& M Management college because of its reputation and cost of the course. As you might know that my college has ranked 18th in QS survey last year. Moreover, it will cost me only Rs. 20 lacs to complete my degree including my accommodation.
The best part of this college is the teaching methodology and professors behavior. We can ask numerous questions on semester courses, and they always response properly. Needless to say, the hostel facilities are the best in the country (as per QS survey). However, course contents are rigorously packed; one can hardly find free time to do extra activities. I believe this is good, as they are preparing us for tough professional careers.
If your GMAT score is more than 650, you must apply without any hesitation. Furthermore, you can give my reference in filling up the application form, which will be beneficial in getting shortlisted.
Hope, I can clarify all you doubt about my college! I will wait to see you in the next term.
Best regards,
Bibhu Kalita
Dear John,
I am
really
happy to
get
a letter from your
end
after almost 2 years, and I am amaze to know that
you
are seeking my
help
in pursuing your master degree. Well, I have taken admission in
A&
; M Management college
because
of its reputation and cost of the course.
As
you might know that my college has ranked 18th in QS survey last year.
Moreover
, it will cost me
only
Rs. 20
lacs
to complete my degree including my accommodation.
The best part of this college is the teaching methodology and professors behavior. We can ask numerous questions on semester courses, and they always
response
properly
. Needless to say, the hostel facilities are the best in the country (as per QS survey).
However
, course contents are
rigorously
packed; one can hardly find free time to do extra activities. I believe this is
good
, as they are preparing us for tough professional careers.
If your GMAT score is more than 650, you
must
apply without any hesitation.
Furthermore
, you can give my reference in filling up the application form, which will be beneficial in getting shortlisted.
Hope, I can clarify all you doubt about my college! I will wait to
see
you in the
next
term.
Best regards,
Bibhu
Kalita
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