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you are a unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter. -Explain where you live-describe the problem-give reason why do not v.1

you are a unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter. -Explain where you live-describe the problem-give reason why do not v. 1
Health problems are the most concerning issue for the humankind throughout the world. These are caused in different ways, like fleas, virus, but there are some other reasons which are affecting the health of common people one of them is because of consuming more fast food. Governments are advising people now and then not to have excess amount of high calorie meals, but the results are not fruitful so there is a suggestion that to implement more tax on these kind of menu to have control on this issue but in my opinion it is a great idea to implement. This essay, will discuss the outcomes of having high tax rates on these kind of meals. Firstly, If we implement this, it may have a negative impact on this industry, but which leads to a good healthy life style for the public. So, It is advisable to have this king of approach to mitigate the issues. Secondly, The government will get benefited by spending less amount of money towards medical subsidies. For instance, a recent study revealed that due to implementing this stated idea the government is about to save 10 billion dollars per annum. In conclusion, It is advisable to have high tax rates on these items which, will lead to money savings for both public and governments and as well it saves the health of the public which leads to economic growth of the country as well. So it is a very good move by a country to impose more rate on these to have an impact.
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different
ways, like fleas, virus,
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but
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some
other reasons which are affecting the health of common
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people
one of them is
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because
of consuming more
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fast
food.
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Governments
are advising
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people
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now
and then not to have excess amount of high calorie meals,
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but
the results are not fruitful
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so
there is a suggestion that to implement more tax on
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these kind
of menu to have control on this issue
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but
in my opinion it is a great
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idea
to implement. This essay, will discuss the outcomes of having high tax rates on
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these kind
of meals.

Firstly
, If we implement this, it may have a
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negative
impact on this industry,
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but
which leads to a
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good
healthy life style for the public.
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So
, It is advisable to have this king of approach to mitigate the issues.

Secondly
, The
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government
will
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get
benefited by spending less amount of money towards medical subsidies.
For instance
, a recent study revealed that due to implementing this stated
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idea
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
is about to save 10 billion dollars per annum.

In conclusion
, It is advisable to have high tax rates on these items which, will lead to money savings for both public and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
and
as well
it saves the health of the public which leads to economic growth of the country
as well
.
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So
it is a
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very
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good
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move
by a country to impose more rate on these to have an impact.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay you are a unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter. -Explain where you live-describe the problem-give reason why do not v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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