Write about the following topic Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today Are these shows a good method of finding talented people or are they just entertainment Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from v.2
Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today Are these shows a good method of finding talented people or are they just entertainment 2
In today world, there are a lot of talented people, who could be found easily in many ways. One of them, which in my view is the most popular in many societies, is through televised talent shows. However, besides the purpose of finding talented ones, TV talent shows could also be really entertaining.
I think, all of the talent shows are a positively good way to find talented people. The people with talents could come on the shows to show off their abilities, such as singing, dancing, doing magic tricks. . . Also, I think, the talent shows could give all of the contestants an extremely good opportunity: they become known to a lot of people. After the shows, the contestants could continue to pursue their dreams with fewer obstacles on their ways.
However, in my opinion, TV programs are all about ratings. The higher the ratings, the more people enjoy the shows. Therefore, all of the talent shows must have something entertaining to attract the viewers, which to increase the ratings of the shows. For example, in American Idol, there are always some bizarre people doing really strange things, which is not related to singing at all. Those people could not get to the next round for sure but they attract a lot of people to watch them, which brings the show a really high rating. For that reason, I believe talent shows are also entertainment.
In conclusion, in my view, TV talent shows are a good way to look for people with natural abilities to sing, to dance, etc. Moreover, they could also be a really entertaining way to relax on our free time.
In
today
world, there are
a lot of
talented
people
, who could
be found
easily
in
many
ways. One of them, which in my view is the most popular in
many
societies, is through televised
talent
shows
.
However
,
besides
the purpose of finding talented ones, TV
talent
shows
could
also
be
really
entertaining.
I
think
,
all of the
talent
shows
are a
positively
good
way to find talented
people
. The
people
with
talents
could
come
on the
shows
to
show
off their abilities, such as singing, dancing, doing magic tricks.
.
.
Also
, I
think
, the
talent
shows
could give
all of the
contestants an
extremely
good
opportunity: they become known to
a lot of
people
. After the
shows
, the contestants could continue to pursue their dreams with fewer obstacles on their ways.
However
, in my opinion, TV programs are all about
ratings
. The higher the
ratings
, the more
people
enjoy the
shows
.
Therefore
,
all of the
talent
shows
must
have something entertaining to attract the viewers, which to increase the
ratings
of the
shows
.
For example
, in American Idol, there are always
some
bizarre
people
doing
really
strange things, which is not related to singing at all. Those
people
could not
get
to the
next
round for sure
but
they attract
a lot of
people
to
watch
them, which brings the
show
a
really
high
rating
. For that reason, I believe
talent
shows
are
also
entertainment.
In conclusion
, in my view, TV
talent
shows
are a
good
way to look for
people
with natural abilities to sing, to dance, etc.
Moreover
, they could
also
be a
really
entertaining way to relax on our free time.
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