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In order to learn people employ different methods Some people prefer to read others would rather listen still others retain more by doing Which method suits you best and why Please use details and examples to develop your essay v.2

In order to learn people employ different methods Some people prefer to read others would rather listen still others retain more by doing Which method suits you best and why Please use details and examples to develop your essay v. 2
The studying process is one of essential parts of our lives. I prefer to enjoy while I learning. I use some specific methods, which will be explored in the following essay. To begin with, the useful method of learning is developing own creative mix of exercises, which consist of all ways of perceiving. For instance, learning languages is not an easy task. How could a student deal with it? The answer to the question is engaging as much sources as possible. A pupil could listen to a foreigner’s radio, read magazines which were published on aiming language, talk to people in the Chatroulette. The second idea in favor of the first states that learning trough the activity is even more fun. Life is too short and I find the concept of meticulous learning too boring. For example, If a student intends to drive a car to an ocean side, what a good idea is listening to a lecture in a car while driving. If a students is laying on a beach, is a time to read a lecture. So, this is how my method work. To sum it up, I claim with confidence that the complex comrehensive and enjoyable approach leads to colorful and pleasant life.
The studying process is one of essential parts of our
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lives
. I prefer to enjoy while I
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learning
. I
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use
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some
specific methods, which will
be explored
in the following essay.

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begin
with, the useful method of
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learning
is developing
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own
creative mix of exercises, which consist of
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all ways
of perceiving.
For instance
,
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learning
languages is not an easy task. How could a student deal with it? The answer to the question is engaging as
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much
sources as possible. A pupil could listen to a foreigner’s radio, read magazines which
were published
on aiming language, talk to
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people
in the
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Chatroulette
.

The second
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idea
in favor of the
first
states that
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learning
trough the activity is even more fun. Life is too short and I find the concept of meticulous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
too boring.
For example
, If a student intends to drive a car to an ocean side, what a
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good
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idea
is listening to a lecture in a car while driving. If
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a students
is laying on a beach, is a time to read a lecture.
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So
, this is how my method work.

To sum it up, I claim with confidence that the complex
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comrehensive
and enjoyable approach leads to colorful and pleasant life.
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IELTS essay In order to learn people employ different methods Some people prefer to read others would rather listen still others retain more by doing Which method suits you best and why Please use details and examples to develop your essay v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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