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1. In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you w v.2

1. In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you w v. 2
In my opinion the person should have all of these charactristic (honesty, intelegence, sence of humor). To be a perfect person we should sum all a good charactristic to succed in diffrent life style. If we want to keep going we should have all the good things in our personality. In my work as a dentist i need honesty with the patients to let them trust me if im lying they will not come again they will not recomend me to other patient in addition to ethics that we got it from our family, and i need to be intelegent to deal with patients cases to solve an health problem to take a good decision in correct place. And i should have a sence of humor to let the patients love me especially thesmall kids they came to do their tooth and they are very nervous, very anxious, so its my job to remove the fearness from them in addition to that if i deal good with them they will let me do my work in best face. Moreover each person should have a good characteristic when they deal with each other to let the friends or the family love them. my brother was the best person in my home he was smart, funny, , honest, thats why everyone in our home was love him everyone in his job was love him, his friends, his wife, when we there was aconversation with him we hoped it will not finish. So if anyone have agood personality with intelegence he will be a good person in the life.
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intelegence
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sence
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person
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diffrent
life style.
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we want to
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keep
going we should have all the
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good
things in our personality. In my work as a dentist
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i
need honesty with the
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patients
to
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let
them trust me if
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im
lying they will not
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again they will not
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recomend
me to other
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patient
in addition
to ethics that we
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got
it from our family, and
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i
need to be
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intelegent
to deal with
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patients
cases to solve
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an
health problem to take a
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good
decision in correct place. And
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should have a
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sence
of humor to
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the
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patients
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love
me
especially
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thesmall
kids they came to do their
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tooth and
they are
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very
nervous,
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anxious,
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my job to remove the
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fearness
from them
in addition
to that if
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i
deal
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good
with them they will
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let
me do my work in best face.
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each
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person
should have a
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good
characteristic when they deal with each other to
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let
the friends or the family
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love
them.
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my
brother was the best
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person
in my home he was smart,
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funny
,
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,
honest,
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thats
why everyone in our home was
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love
him everyone in his job was
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love
him, his friends, his wife, when we there
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was
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aconversation
with him we hoped it will not finish.
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anyone
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have
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agood
personality with
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intelegence
he will be a
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good
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person
in the life.
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19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30Mistakes

IELTS essay 1. In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you w v. 2

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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