Social media has become an integral part of human life. And we are becoming dependent on it. Many people believe that it helps to do their work at outside of their workplace. While others feel that mobility have some bad impact on our society. However, I agree with the former statement. I believe that social media have so many beneficial side those are outweigh the drawback of technology.
It is generally thought that social media bring a great revolution in our connectivity. Firstly, The connectivity experience today is unimaginable. The world has become a smaller place with social media. On the other hand social media is a platform that has empowered people to showcase talent. All over the world, people can work their official assignment at home. For instance, when people stay at home or travelling they can do their job by itself. After all, it makes their life beneficial and productive. Move over Many people use internet for their presentation. Using internet saves them time and money.
In addition, Social media have so many disadvantages. Firstly over use of internet established communication gap. Many parents have no enough time to spend with their children. Because of their work at home. It has an undesirable effect on their children and some people miss communications with their colleagues. Secondly, some people doing cyber crime. It is really an anxiety attack. For example Hackers stole $101 million from Bangladesh Bank accounts February 2016. Finally, addiction the social communication side having a detrimental effect on young generation. They are doing the crime.
In conclusion, there are some negative expected to social media and social media or technology. If it is used sensibly and people take a regular break from their computer. There is only benefit that remains
Social
media
has become an integral part of human life. And we are becoming dependent on it.
Many
people
believe that it
helps
to do their work at
outside of
their workplace.
While
others feel that mobility have
some
bad
impact on our society.
However
, I
agree
with the former statement. I believe that
social
media
have
so
many
beneficial side those are
outweigh
the drawback of technology.
It is
generally
thought
that
social
media
bring a great revolution in our connectivity.
Firstly
, The connectivity experience
today
is unimaginable. The world has become a smaller place with
social
media
.
On the other hand
social
media
is a platform that has empowered
people
to showcase talent. All over the world,
people
can work their official assignment at home.
For instance
, when
people
stay at home or travelling they can do their job by itself.
After all
, it
makes
their life beneficial and productive.
Move
over
Many
people
use
internet for their presentation. Using internet saves them time and money.
In addition
,
Social
media
have
so
many
disadvantages.
Firstly
over
use
of internet established communication gap.
Many
parents have no
enough
time to spend with their children.
Because
of their work at home. It has an undesirable effect on their children and
some
people
miss communications with their colleagues.
Secondly
,
some
people
doing cyber crime. It is
really
an anxiety attack.
For example
Hackers stole $101 million from Bangladesh Bank accounts February 2016.
Finally
, addiction the
social
communication side having a detrimental effect on young generation. They are doing the crime.
In conclusion
, there are
some
negative
expected
to
social
media
and
social
media
or technology. If it is
used
sensibly
and
people
take a regular break from their computer. There is
only
benefit that
remains
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