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Write a minimum of 250 words You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of v.1

Write a minimum of 250 words The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of v. 1
Leaders can be found in all spheres of life, for example heads of state, managers, and parents. While some people think that leadership skills are bestowed at birth, there is ample evidence to suggest these skills can be learned. I believe both views can be wright partial. Many believe leaders have been born with some extraordinary abilities. Lots of people are thinking about the quality of being a superb leader is only in some special individuals, it is in their blood, characters and is inherited by genes from their former generation. And that’s why some families who think in this way, persist on marriage with families who have an appropriate social status. Moreover, we have been witness thousands of leaders who not only have no academic literacy but also have been top-notch leaders. For instance, Mahatmas Gundy, the leader of Indians protests against Britain’s colony who made India an independent country. On the other hand, some consider the ability to lead people could be learned exactly like other skills. At this point of view, people claim that this sort of thing is educational and that’s why, we have witnessed mounting in the number of management courses and if these skills could not be taught, there would not many courses. Also, we, as humans, gain knowledge and experience during our life that make us a well-rounded person. A mature person has been acquired more cognitive towards the world around them in comparison when they are younger and this wisdom and cognizance can help them to be better bosses or leaders. It is clear from the points mentioned that leadership can be learned, but leaders should have a charismatic character and this quality must be in their traits. All in all, I believe being a good leader requires some instinctive abilities besides learning management skills.
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be found
in all spheres of life,
for example
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some
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people
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think
that leadership
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skills
are bestowed
at birth, there is ample evidence to suggest these
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skills
can
be learned
. I believe both views can be wright partial.

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Many
believe
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leaders
have
been born
with
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some
extraordinary abilities. Lots of
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people
are thinking about the quality of being a superb
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leader
is
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only
in
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some
special individuals, it is in their blood, characters and
is inherited
by genes from their former generation. And that’s why
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some
families
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who
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think
in this way, persist on marriage with families
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who
have an appropriate social status.
Moreover
, we have been witness thousands of
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leaders
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who
not
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only
have no academic literacy
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but
also
have been top-notch
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leaders
.
For instance
, Mahatmas
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Gundy
, the
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leader
of Indians protests against Britain’s colony
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who
made India an independent country.

On the other hand
,
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some
consider the ability to lead
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people
could
be learned
exactly like other
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skills
. At this point of view,
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people
claim that this sort of thing is educational and that’s why, we have witnessed mounting in the number of management courses and if these
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skills
could not
be taught
, there would not
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many
courses.
Also
, we, as humans, gain knowledge and experience during our life that
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make
us a well-rounded person. A mature person has
been acquired
more cognitive towards the world around them
in comparison
when they are younger and this wisdom and cognizance can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them to be better bosses or leaders.

It is
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clear
from the points mentioned that leadership can
be learned
,
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but
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leaders
should have a charismatic character and this quality
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must
be in their traits. All in all, I believe being a
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good
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leader
requires
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some
instinctive abilities
besides
learning management
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skills
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Write a minimum of 250 words The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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